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Silent Exile

Fantasy 9 章 20.6K ビュー
作者: Gecko

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Time spent within the nothingness beyond the Horizon is bound to change anyone, much less the young soul of a human boy. The changes this time around, however, would be unlike anything anyone would’ve expected, the boy included.

Not everything within this pitch black space was friendly, something the boy would soon come to know.

Now, saved by a Goddess who seems to have bigger plans for his previously dull existence, and the looming threat of world-wide enslavement, the boy must struggle to contest with his world’s most powerful, all while being cut from the benefits everyone else had been provided.

This, however, also meant that he was exempt from many of the rules these benefits came with.

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Hello!

A quick reminder that this is only my second attempt at writing a longer cohesive story and tags are bound to be added as the story progresses. The tags selected at the making of this novel should, therefore, be considered as being "possibilities" instead of promises. I will try and remain open to changing tags and the direction of this story based on feedback, as I hope to create something that can be enjoyed by as many people as possible.

So, again, any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

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grootsroots

The first few lines were quite confusing and I felt that it wasn't particularly leading anywhere. Overall it was good as the first introduction into the novel. Is like to see what comes after, hope you continue writing.

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