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概要
A soul finds himself in a DC Universe with the most laid-back idle and passive system in the existence of systems, a daily sign-in system!
sign in in persons, places, or things, for the corresponding system rewards.
wait?...why are my system rewards so familiar?
what do they have in common?
Aren't they all from various Marvel World's next door?
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レビューを書くReal Rating: ⭐⭐ 2/5 Overall I've read up to chapter 7 and the grammar is really bad. To the point I'm confident in saying it's an MTL with edited spelling. Batman speaks like he hasn't passed the third grade. Which really kills any story immersion. It's a shame because the story premise seemed promising at first. Also there are some sections where some effort is made to make it readable. Those are few and far between though. The author needs to address these issues before asking for any donations at the end of each chapter.
i love dc and marvel and i love sign-in novels + an MC who so far is actually capable of keeping a low profile, so right now this is high up on my reading list. Also hasn't got an op power like sentry straight away a mean the healing factor is strong but its just that a healing factor so i cant wait to see what power or iteams he gets. i imagine his end game would be sentry/knull/rune king thor wielding op gear like doom armour/infinity gems and comic ten rings
Here are the good and bads of this novel: •Good• 1.The premise is great and the main character has a good head on his shoulders. 2.He—as in the Mc— is smart and doesn't want attention till he can use or manage it to his benefit. 3.Another plus is that he doesn't get overpowered from the start. •Bads• 1.Grammar is horrendous. Too many grammatical errors, typos and misspellings. I'll suggest that Author get an editor, download Grammerly or just try to improve their English proficiency. 2. The dialogue isn't the best and the character representation is average at best. All in all, the novel is worth reading and if the English is improved, it will be among the best DC and Marvel Fanfics. I hope this helps. Thank you.
I don't know if it's just me or the writing is very confusing like i don't know what am i reading _____________________________________________________________________________________
This is one of the best starts among all the marvel x dc fanfics of all time. It's good that mc stays low-key. DC is not a world where you can show off. Both the heroes and villains are crazy over there. Not stay completely low but have to stay out of the radar of batman.
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作者 aloudtntcode
Bro why Harem why pls Just make a singel femal lead and i read it