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In a world shrouded in darkness and deceit, Omega is reborn into the clutches of HYDRA, trained as a weapon from infancy. Subjected to relentless experiments and combat training, he grapples with the insidious influence of his captors while battling to reclaim his identity. As memories of his past life begin to resurface, Omega discovers extraordinary powers within himself.
Navigating a treacherous path, he confronts the demons of his upbringing and the formidable forces of HYDRA. With each challenge, he grows stronger, refusing to be a pawn in their twisted game. As he fights for freedom and a chance to redefine his destiny, will Omega emerge as the hero he was meant to be, or remain a shadow of the weapon they intended him to become?
Male Oc x Peter Parker
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I will delete my review of this, if there is fucture improvements. Ultron arc was mess, i was unable to tell why it was even written when there is no involment of mc and in few episode it was hinted like that fight with hulk did not happen, Ultron stole that vibranium before Avengers got to him, also it was written in a way that seems like that Ultron was born before they attacked hydra and they are just attacking that base for two enchanced, also author cannot argue it that it is a au because there is a big loophole because scepter was still at base and Ultron was created with it. In act 2, there is still Jarvis but he is uploaded in vision, stark's ai should be Friday,
Dude, your story is really good, I loved your idea! I can't wait for you to post the next chapters, dear author! I also wanted to let you know that I found some spelling mistakes (it might be the translator's fault, sorry, English is not my first language) and incircumstances with the narrative, like Dr. Volkor (is that the name!? I don't even remember) using "Mind Stone" in a speech he makes to Stryker when he shouldn't even know about it? Additionally, I also found that the timeline used in your story does not match that of the canonical MCU (are you writing with the Marvel Cinematic Universe timeline in mind? Or, are you going to address some elements of the comics? So many questions, man, I hope you don't get upset with this long text of mine) while reading your story, some sentences in the first chapters became a bit repetitive and boring to read, I recommend you try to take a look at this, but otherwise it was great, author! 😉👍 Looking forward to the next update 💖💖💖💖