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[Restore The Crown]
This was the novel that I was tasked to review as a contestant for our yearly webnovel event and as someone who had to probably read hundreds of novels by now.
It was utter garbage, it was full of overdone tropes and cliches that you could have seen from a mile away.
A bland and mary sue protagonist ✓
A list of heroines who fall in love and become obsessed with the protagonist instantly ✓
A myriad of villains who have no other personality other than to hate and try to kill the protagonist ✓
They were all there.
Except for the surprisingly catchy title, there was no other positive thing about this novel.
But was pissed me off the most was the ending.
With no build-up and seemingly out of nowhere, most of the heroines were killed and the world that they lived in became hell on earth.
It was literally revealed in a couple of chapters and was clearly done just to shock the readers.
Honestly, I wish I could restore the time I wasted reading this novel.
But as I said my criticism to the author.
The f*cker shot me in the head!
(I proofread my chapters by myself, sadly I am only human, so if you find any mistakes, kindly point them out and I will fix them as soon as possible)
(This is my first attempt at writing novels, to those who keep on reading despite the occasional mistakes here and there, I thank you from the bottom of my heart and I will promise to be a better author, anyways have a nice day and please never build galeforce on twitch, if you do, you don't deserve 8 hours of sleep, that is all, thank you)
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So I started this novel because author said it was not aa harem and I am happy I did. After reading everything chapter I can assure you that this is a hidden gem, a masterpiece. The mc has his own morales and goal and never deviate to attain them. The writing improve as time goes and the part I most liked is how the author executed every parts of the assassinations. Even when the mc is pitifully weak in front of an enemy he use his skill to the best of their capabilities and appear to be equal and even stronger than them making him appear as a mysterious and op characters to others. I'm looking forward to see how the romance part goes
It's been a while since a read a novel similar to author pov...man should I say you are doing an amazing job...I hope that you don't stop this novel and see it to the end ....I see potential in this novel and as well as you...if you are in need of any support please do tell ...I will do what I can..and thank you sincerely...and this is justy wish..I hope he ends up with the goddess and gets to go back to his world together...man that would be a perfect ending I guess..😁😁😁
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I love it, very good novel. But is it possible to add harem and a touch of romance to it. I mean it is clearly impossible for the MC to not even like at least one girl from this world.
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this is a review for the beginning part of the novel. Story is good. the way the mc is and his goal is just so interesting especially when his powerup is based on that. I like that he is good but not save everyone good .the characters are interesting and i like how mc rather than just following what he is told to do, thinks of an alternative to achieve said end result. I'll not read for a month and when I'm back I hope we have up to 100 chapters + Good work author
I love it, very good start and interesting plot, keep up the good work author [img=recommend][img=recommend]
whenever i pre-review a webnovel without reading it first,it somehow turns out to be great and i might as well shoot my shot here as well[img=proud]
it is really good i am always searching for the transported to game or novel i found a hidden gem but please don t drop it [img=coins] 000
....will there be a system...... and if there is then when will it appear.....by the way good luck for your journey 🙂👍👍
It's Good It's A Hidden gem. But there are some scenes in starting it's like Copy of Many Novels in of Same Troop but than There it feels like it is Copy of Korean Novel of Same Troop but after the more you read more diffrence you find it's a Fantastic Novel
so far so good, I like the main character personality and where the story is heading to, wish there were more cheapters tho [img=recommend]
Wassup readers and potential readers. Shameless Author here 👋Despite the sypnosis and the direction in the beginning especially when he gets those main missions. This is not a harem novel. This is the very first novel I wrote for fun. Heavily inspired by the I Killed the Player Academy and Trash of the Counts family novels. If u find any spelling mistakes here and there I apologize and I promise to be a better author. To those who are already readers, thanks for giving the time to read my novel. And as always never build galeforce on twitch because if u do u dont deserve 8 hours of sleep.