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Seven Deadly Sins: Enders struggle as a pacifistic demon.
4.1 (31 レビュー結果)
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Dying is one thing but being reborn as an Enderman in the Demon Realm? Watch as Ender tries to survive the horror of living as a demon. Maybe being a coward has its perks.
Contains amnesia so be warned.
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Personally, I thoroughly enjoy this novel, but it does have its problems. Most of the reviewers have already said like how the MC isn't really developing and he is just watching canon. I also do believe that this is an issue that should be addressed, but I like where the story is currently. Pros: Very little problems with spelling or grammar. The story is going to canon and is interesting to read. It has some quite enjoyable scenes. Cons: Bad Character Design (Please improve, I love this story) World background is subpar with him doing nothing Pretty slow update schedule with few chapters (Not dropped currently) Overall, I enjoy reading this novel, but I have to acknowledge the problems that this story has to offer. I hope the author reads this and attempts to fix these issues to make his story flow better. 3.8 Stars.
Great book author-sama, but will wonder becomes high class demon and get a human form also a re e there lemon sence with melascula in the future
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Starting is interesting but MC stays weak from the war to the canon. There is no improvement in his thinking ability even after thousands of years. Weaker than canon fodder demon and still don't know how to use powers effectively..
I dont care i love your naruto novel, i love seven deadly sins and im guessing you mean minecraft endermen?? Not sure but LOVE it too please dont drop.
Cant wait to read more since this story takes a really interesting look at the world of the seven deadly sins with the overall idea of a pacifist demon who has a pretty op ability which compliments his nature, but also deals with his psychological issues.
El autor no se equivocó en su descripción es mala como la corrupción en Argentina. Con primicia del nuevo cuerpo podría ser mucho más pero no... Solo es un espectador, para justificar un cambió que podría ser respondido por ser una persona malvada en su primera vida y tener un personaje que le gusta jugar detrás escena, pero tenemos un persona que es un espectador y nosotros un espectador de otro. No tengo mucho más que decir solo leí hasta el CAP7 pero no creo que valga la pena leer más. Podrías decir que está mal que critique sin leer todo la novela, pero una novela no es solo la parte buena o mala sino un conjunto contante. Y en el único fue malo aunque podría mejorar lo más probable es que no lo haga.
I approve this novel as the lord of big pps 👉👈. And made me see the light different way now I will do less sacrificing in the name of the mayonnaise God.
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The idea was interesting but there was no character development even after 3000 years. I don't mind him being a pacifist and all but his kid like mentality remains the same throughout the years.
Personally, I think the story was great, there's not usually a lot of good seven deadly sins stories like this but this one was spectacular it included pretty decent writing quality story development long chapters and good world background I really hope this offer goes on to update more
the fanfic in itself is good the problem i'm facing is the lack of updates it's been a few months since the last update and I'm dying trying to wait for the next chapter to see the story develop
I love this fanfic it's so well done one of the first I've read on this site and it set the bar really high so please continue writing this fanfic
Je suis assez mitigé. L'écriture est plutôt bien faite, rien à redire là dessus. Le fond de l'histoire est assez intéressant et j'aime beaucoup l'idée d'un démon pacifique qui est coincé entre son désir de paix, son amour, son amitié avec un traître et son attachement avec son propre clan, et avec ça pas mal d'idées et de concepts assez originaux et très sympathique (Notamment l'enderman). Mais le gros soucis, c'est le développement qui est vraiment pas très bien. Le MC n'évolue pas du tout, même avec plus de 3000 ans d'existence, les relations et discussions avec les autres personnages se résument à "-Bonjour" -"Bonjour, je suis ender" -"Je t'aime bien." C'est vraiment bâclé à ce niveau là. Et autre chose, pour ender, on nous sort des histoires et pouvoirs tous droits sortis de son cul. Je pense en particulier à la baguette mais surtout à l'histoire avec le type du clan des déesses qui meurt, où on nous invente tout un truc alors que perso, je m'en brande de lui là qui meurt. C'est tellement mal fait que je me suis pas du tout attaché à lui et ai rapidement zappé son existence. Bref, en résumé, j'ai l'impression qu'il y a eu plein d'excellentes idées, mais qui on était très mal utilisées et dont on a oublié de mettre quelque chose entre elles.
I love this and the story, even though it has its bad moments i'd still reread this over................................................................[img=exp][img=recommend]
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The vast majority of fanfiction writers are "amateurs", I don't say that to offend anyone, but it is the truth, many are learning and others just want to "kill time", so in many fanfics we see basic mistakes, mistakes like: side characters are not interesting, the protagonist existence is irrelevant and don't causes any changes in the world, the novel is poorly writing, there is no world building, a lot of plot armor, relationships are robotic, among other things ... What makes us read these novels is usually the universe in which the fanfic takes place and the MC, I am not saying that the MC of these novels (which I quoted) are perfect, I am saying that the chosen universe is very interesting, have interesting characters and that a protagonist different can make you see things in a different way: New romances, new battles, new skills, new characters, a new world ... What I mean by all of this is: This novel is not well written and the character is ridiculously written. The universe of "seven deadly sins" is interesting by itself, but that is all. The relationships are summarized in a few lines "Ender loves her, that is it.", The dialogues are stupid, they look like children talking to each other, the protagonist is one of the worst protagonist's that i ever seen, he is: absolutely coward, dumb as fk, weak, embarrassed , has mental disabilities and other problems. The MC does not EVOLVE, each and every human being is able to evolve, a person can change drastically in a few years, there is a saying that says: "The same frog never drinks from the same lake", the protagonist lived for more than 3000 years, and even so he didn't evolve as a "person", the only thing that changed was the development of "mental illnesses", this is insane. He is supposed to be involved in all major events, but he is so insignificant that he cannot change anything at all, this is a ridiculous strategy by the author to include him in the plot as an important character, the existence of the protagonist is irrelevant. There is no world building, there is no relationship building, there is no character evolution, there are no adventures, there are no changes in the original timeline, the protagonist is watching the events happen, that is all. Goodbye.