/ Anime & Comics / Saruyama Kenichi Takes Control (Rewrite)
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The story is about Saruyama Kenichi, a boy who, due to a certain incident, receives the ability to look at alternate realities. After gaining this ability, he realizes that he is nothing more than the secondary character of an ecchi anime, whose only role is to be the perverted friend of the protagonist. With renewed determination and the help of a convenient system, Kenichi resists his future destiny as the protagonist's loser friend, but it is not going to be an easy road. In addition to perverts and aliens, the world in which he finds himself is slightly different from the one he saw in other realities. Will Kenichi overcome all difficulties and gain control of his own life?
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I guess I expected much. I thought that this rewrite would actually fix Kenichi's overall character but he is just the same generic nice guy. The only thing pretty much is just some added scenarios overall with no major actual changes. Kenichi is still a boring MC, some characters like Rito are turned into weirdos just to push the girls to the MC and again information is just explained terribly. Thought that the author could finally make a Side MC story in a Harem Work but it just didn't but turn him into the actual MC in a Harem.
You had good writing potential and had dedication, daily high quality uploads for a month wow, you were getting better and better, you could have made it great, but you just chose to quit and be lazy, i came back to see whether any updates but you ended up like those losers who start something but cannot finish, good luck with whatever you end up doing.
Bro, I was right dizzy when I read that because English is mixed up with your native language
As the title says, it is a rewrite of the previous one to fix and solve some parts. I hope it is for the best and that this time it does have an uninterrupted continuation.
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Espero que al menos no cambie demasiado con la primera historia, después de todo me gustaba la anterior y sería una pena que está nueva reescritura no fuera tan buena como la primera, tocará ver y esperar que está al menos sea tan buena como la primera historia
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El mejor fanfic que he leído en muchos tiempo, me recuerda a un fanfic de majikoi que tiene como protagonista a un personaje pervertido y que era secundario como saruyama con un sistema que le obliga a combatir y ser fuerte
bro, didn't you say you will continue the original, and if you wrote another, why not in English