Quite an interesting fantasy romance story. But for some reason the first chapter doesn't seem to trigger enough to read the rest (maybe adding a cliffhanger in the first chapter would be better) The storyline is good, I like it. But maybe more narration can be added, and there are some punctuation errors. Keep up the good work author!
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Quite an interesting fantasy romance story. But for some reason the first chapter doesn't seem to trigger enough to read the rest (maybe adding a cliffhanger in the first chapter would be better) The storyline is good, I like it. But maybe more narration can be added, and there are some punctuation errors. Keep up the good work author!