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Just a guy getting reincarnated into RWBY as Kirito. Oh, and Alice is there as well. That's about it. Note: This story is not original. I'm the person who creates original SYSTEMS, not stories. This one might be cliche.
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Cant really say much i just read a couple of chapters i got really no good or bad to say about it ... more like annoying , i never understood this in these kind of stories... its basic human reaction to want to be good looking, strongest,fastest,smartest etc etc. no one is like" i want to be a fat guy with acne problems" so why is the mc picking a normal looking average guy as his looks ?"kirito" -_- he even stole his name that's so lame and he got a pretty wimpy attitude i don't mind a kind of or innocent attitude but that's not it he got a wimpy attitude , its written good got really no complaints just that i wrote above and that's more annoying then a complaint ?
I don't know a thing about rwby so I am a little lost so I am not against someone making a summarized anyway I like it . .. ..............
Ah, yes, originality, this wonderful word that the author is selling us, poor readers. In fact everything was fine, he didn't get any wishes, he didn't die like other mcs in other isekais, and the god's backstory was interesting. Until you realise the mc is not original at all and the story development neither, the mc is your classic goody two shoes good guy and he completely copies KIRITO from his looks to even his full name. And then, the salty part, so the author wants to make the story ORIGINAL, that's why he uses the classic cliché of the daughter of god going on an adventure as mc's lover... and names her ALICE, like alice in alicization, he even gave her the same looks... Making random crossovers don't make your story original, anyone could think of a story of a random guy having ash's looks (pokemon) with Tatsuya Shiba's name (mahouka) with a genshin impact system and call it 'original' (it didn't even take me 20 sec to think of this so you know).
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(Translated with Google Translate) In summary, this story is presented as a reincarnation fic, where the protagonist knows the plot and instead of taking advantage of his knowledge to survive in the world of Remanent, the protagonist adopts the name and appearance of Kirito, accompanied by the daughter of God. who sent him to the world of Remanent and who adopts the name and appearance of Alice follow the plot without modifying almost anything, the only thing that has changed is that sometimes the protagonists (Kirito and Alice) say the dialogues of other characters. I like the idea of the story, but what I don't like is that it says that it is a system like SAO, but the system is unbalanced, the protagonist acquires many skills at the highest level as a reward, which renders their development useless or Kirito to get to work uploading them, another problem he presents is that the protagonist is a wimp in front of the girls, in addition to being somewhat silly in his interactions with them, which degrades him to being comic relief or being treated as a mascot by the girls.
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they character development is this story major problem. there is hardly any character development in male MC parts and author also does not hint towards any future character development in male MC in his thoughts. other than this, author made male MC too stupid. I don't even have words to say anything about it. To me personally, this story feels like story of Alice and male MC other girls as the way author writes. Warning: anyone who hates simp or beta MC who are afraid of women and follow their orders like a dog, than this novel is not for you otherwise this novel could be considered good if author focus a bit more on above mentioned things. especially his way of writing as to me when I was reading it felt like he made female MCs the main protagonist and added male MC for cute moments of female MCs
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it's very good i hope you continue posting more chapters it's very entertaining and fun to read good concept to
I have yet to read it but I am hoping for an awesome story with such a unique idea! I only have one request my good man, please have Ruby Rose and Salem be with the MC. I ask this for two reasons, one is that ruby rose is adorable and deserves all the love and attention possible. Two is that I have read only two stories with Salem in it when she deserves some loving, I mean think about it she is not only hot but if she falls in love with the MC and they get together and she changes then you get an awesome romance and possible cross over into SAO with two lovers! Just an idea and I will most likely read this either way....
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I love this novel because of how smooth the story is or they can overcome the problem and how they grinding their skills and taking a good skills <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
Interesting very interesting i cant wait for more and the concept of a SAO system goes perfect with rwby since their being so many weapons and hunters with things like saiyans and other bullshi’t its nice to see a balanced and good godam’n system for once