章 11: Question
I saw some concerns about the chapter pacing and a possible time skip. First off my intention for writing this story to go in detail and explain how he became proficient in using all how gifts. I planed on using his younger years to set up his organization. I gave a brief glimpse of his thinking and plans.
I wanted his travels to start with his parents at a younger age once he masters ligilimency and rudimentary magic. He would go to Japan on one such adventure and be invited to be a day student at mahatakuro school of magic there as it starts at age 7 he would collect info from there go to newt for some time to be introduced to magical beasts, gain their trust and feather materials for his wand.(as I said even though windless magic is better he will maximize his potential in both just like students of modern day Ugandoo. (Excuse my spellings I will fix them later)
He would set up his elf squadron etc. and a few surprises along the way that I wanted to save for later hint(something related to newt's trunk and the Phoenix-dragon)
I have read other fanfics where they breeze through their pre got warts years and just summarize their mastery in mindsets Bering yo criminals getting money and everything without details. I wanted to make it different.
Just as Batman could defeat anyone with enough prep time.
I wanted the Mac to gain advantage of his prep time and anonymity in his younger years to establish a somewhat sold foothold.
I had no big time skips planed because my story was supposed to have three volumes first one preschool, second one his schools(yes multiple) third one fighting the hidden organizations and cremating a true safe haven for all things magical.
Now let me know if you want me to continue this route or make a story with a time skip to his school years and make small notes on his accomplishments.
Again he would live with two main identities thanks to his metamorphmagus abilities. One as Dresden and the other as the leader of the brotherhood possible name suggestions are welcome or should I title him Ras-Al-Gul.
So please let me know, also if you notice the grammar errors or some confusing phrases please let me know so that I could fix them. As I said this is the first time I am writing and publishing it. I will try to fix it.
I will start posting again in the next week or two, thanks for your patience.
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