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Tells the story of a man who returns to his original world after more than 10 years of adventure in a different world.
When he came back, the man realized that he had gone out to have fun.
It was hard to believe that he was in a coma and woke up after 1 year.
Now the man who has the body of his youth is facing something cruel from another world full of monsters that is the reality of the World.
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It might have been a great novel if the English weren't too hard to understand. I usually try not to judge the quality of work by the author's mastery of grammar, especially since this is not my first language either, but that can only be the case when it's possible to make sense of what I am reading. I hope the author can find someone to help edit this because both the premise and the ideas seem quite interesting. All that the story lacks is the ability to transmit information in an easily absorbable way. Overall I would recommend it for those that are used to mtl and can force themselves to understand the text even when it is hard to piece things together. Thank you for the attention and have a nice day.
It could be better but a returning hero weaker than freed is pathetic and will be boring to read because I'm sure the mc will get some bs power up. It has potential but I'm not willing to stick around to see if it gets better.
This book has a lot of potential but the lack of spell check and gender pronouns being flipped flopped around made it difficult to follow. The oc itself is pretty mundane and bland, the story while in the beginning held alot my interest, it started to feel like any other dXd story i.e save Aisa, train rias, and become an aloof bystander that solves everything. This last part is just a quirk of mine but the fact that he revealed the source of his power ruined it for me. Otherwise Author i hope you continue to write and get better at story crafting you have like i said great potential
Once again, a novel with trash english. It was probably MTL'ed : it killed my interest.
I don’t think this is the posters fanfic… Too many errors that are common among translations, random gender changes for characters from one sentence to the next, and just bad dialogue overall.
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Writing Quality sucks Updates? we get some Story Development also sucks Character Design is no where to be found World Background is also not up to par That MC is a pushover who will do whatever anyone wants him to and will just explain it as his Dragon Pride....BS
Pronouns: I, Me, My, Mine.{Boy}:He, Him, His, His.{girl}:She, Her, Her, Hers. {In a group that you are include}: We, Us, Our, Ours. {a group that you are not include}: They, Them, Their, Theirs. {when you talk to somebody who is alone}: You, You, Your, Yours.
Intressting story Please don't drop this story this is One of the best i have read and intressting plot and I LIKE IT!!!!!👏👏👏👏😁 Will mc have a harem or not?
You cant say that he lived in a live or die world for 10 years and then make him come back and do mistakes that even basic rookies do. Trying to bring the main cast into the story is really poorly written but other than that the story was pretty ok not that bad. Could use some more thinking into plot.