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P.S- TO THE READERS, IT'S MY FIRST TIME WRITING THE NOVEL SO THIS BOOK MAY NOT MEET THE EXPECTATIONS FOR SOME READERS.
AND AS I USING WEBNOVEL APP TO WRITE THE STORIES SO I MIGHT BE NOT BE ABLE TO SEE THE SUMMONING PEN OPTION.
Note:- There might be some sex scenes that some people would not like. So read it with caution
Robin was playing a game with his friends, he was cursed by one of his friends who asked him to die and soon he was struck by lightning and died.
After traversing to the new world his soul mutated and got five overpowered abilities.
The world he lives in is very vast, there are very few areas with human settlements.
Most of the other areas are forbidden zone where monsters rule the world.
Read as Robin fight with his companions to become the
top adventurer group in the world.
Disclaimer:- The photo cover isn't mine. If you're the creator of the photo then you can tell me I will remove the image.
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to be honest the concept is there. the story should be there too, but your writing quality is terrible. worse than mtl in my opinion which should say something. get an editor. and stop rushing the story
interesting concept. sadly the grammar and writing quality is really bad. additionally the story is premium with this bad quality. The conversations seem forced and it fells like a lot is missing out of the story. with better quality and more design and explanations this story could be really good
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In my honesty, I do really like the concept of this book. Cards as the concept of battle are a very fascinating concept especially with how the mechanic works. While this author quite executes the system very well and the first-person perspective is also quite nice As for the main character, I think you should give him more background in the first chapter or even the reaction when he suddenly entered the world, but I guess there will be nice future development for him. I think that's all I have to say for your book and thank you very much. Keep up the good works!!
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A good idea, but bad execution. The author said he uses "Grammarly" but it is still almost unreadable, or just a headache to read. Maybe he improved over time, but I just can´t bring myself to sit down and read more than 10 chapters. Author, if you read this, I recommend you rewrite the first few chapters to iron out all the mistakes, or just ask a friend/editor to proofread it for you,
you know, even after this much bad reviews I still see hope In this story, I will support you, keep up the good work, as you can only learn more by trying harder...
ok, for real, the writing quality sucks. i can't understand anything and im used to reading machine translated stuff. not recommended, but if the chapters were revised from the beginning it could be a pretty decent novel
hero is op... this is most basic thing I want.and good friends/teammates +harem too and dungeons and monsters and what not. I haven't seen whole book. only up to 65+ chap. but I didn't see any reason to not continue this novel. anyone reading this review to whether or not read this book. I recommend to try atleast 30+ chapters
the grammar kills this. the concept may be good. to be honest I'm not sure what the heck was really happening due to how bad the grammar was
I feel this is your first so an advice use 3rd person point of view 2. keep changing point view from him to another person but so far you did avery good job 👏👍
Bro… Not even grammarly knew how to fix your grammar. That’s when you know that you’re beyond saving. I doubt even the best editor would want to edit this.
Reading this was worse than reading mtl story is decent is you can get that, I couldn't though I read it as a free day promotion so i wasn't out anything at least
I like the story but where are the new chapters?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
The grammar is all messy, and it goes premium with bad grammar at 31 chapters, it's not really worth wasting unlocking those chapters, sorry dude, you had a great concept at the beginning
your story is exactly how i want but the only thing holding it back is the quality of the story exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
is the title supposed to say reincarted ? isn’t it supposed to say reincarnated? plz tell me!
Except for the writing quality everything is good.. loved the story...it's full of surprises...so you will not be bored, I loved the cooking part. Thanks for the book
its an honest reveiw here so the writting quality is all over the place in the very very beggining but cleared up some by the second chapter if not the second half of the first chapter maybe make it a bit more organized and itd be good now the story progressions is to fast paced your here then there this happened then that it has great potential but at the same time needs to be worked on and touched up here and there and its good to go oh and slow it down some as well and that's about it 4.0 pretty good
The book has potential. Good use of words that complement the subject of the story as a whole. And as a reader you get the chance to see the author's ideas and how he placed them to make them into a story
absolute garbage. trash horrenduous formating. too many misspellings and grammatical error every single chapter. disgusting characters. shallow plot. bad flow. it feels as if the author has never written an essay or taken an English class before.
you have a good idea a nice concept but the gramar is just so bad it hurts to read.