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Reincarnated as Superman in Marvel/DC [ Dropped]

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作者: Insert_Here

4.45 (12 レビュー結果)

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This is my first story

feedback is greatly appreciated



( All the right go to Marvel studio's and also the owners of the DC universe, the oc is the only thing I own. )

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12レビュー

4.45

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TERMINATOR

great job with the book it need some better story development but overall is a good book it is just a very rushed but it is a good book nice job.

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CAPTAINAMERICA19

Great Job with the story you are doing a great job even though it is your very first book so congrats on that my one problem is the quality of writing focus some of your time on going back and editing your story.

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French_Deadpool

you should delete the last message it shows your uncertain side, it will not motivate some people to be interested in your story (rewritten or not)

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Ron_Blackwood

Overall Trash 🗑️ Chapters too short Not worth Reading 😕 No World Building. Not the Best Narrating and Lots of Fake Reviews with Fake ID's. So much Extra Details which aren't really needed. Try to Make an Outline for the story first before writing Good Luck For Your Future Novel's We all start from Somewhere 👌🏻

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SucktiferDSucky

It is me sucktifer here to bestow my holy blessing upon your seemingly good looking book, aslo thank you for liking my book you sexy kind person

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投稿に失敗します。もう一度やり直してください
  • テキストの品質
  • アップデートの安定性
  • ストーリー展開
  • キャラクターデザイン
  • 世界の背景

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