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Henry Anderson, a normal teenager, is killed by a truck and receiving wishes from a God, reincarnated in a fictional world, like Khun Eduan, what will he do now? What will your goals be? What will he get?
Follow Khun Eduan on his Journey to the top of the Omniverse
*The cover is not mine*
*English is not my first language*
*Bad grammar*
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to be honest the author should add the tag of alternate universe the Grammar is very good on points and trash in the second the MC isn't even unique in n this ccase as a lot of people were born at the same t in me as his meaning they are probably as powerful as his which take from the story so so much
I like how the world setting is and the only problem i can think of is the grammer as some things takes me to reread it multiple times to understand it.
Amazing work no complaints to be said keep it up man 👍 Yes yup yes I yup yes yes I yup I love it so I love you too I hope so so much yup yup yeah yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes
Get a friend to edit your work. asking a friend can help you to understand where you are going wrong. I wont be reading further, but please get a friends help.
Great story, never seen any ff where khun eudan is the mc. The grammar is a bit lacking but still readable and the only thing that I don't like so far is there is another reincarnator because it feels like there are two mc(which is something I dont enjoy). The author mixed Highschool DxD and ToG pretty well. Overall the story is great and perfect if only you ignore the second reincarnator. I JUST HOPE THAT THE SECOND REINCARNATOR WON'T APPEAR TOO MUCH
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