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Your abilities are gained from the past you have lived. Young Tora is on a journey to change the current norm. will he have the power to do it or will he be consumed along the way?
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Just read the first 12 chapters, tenses are good and the word placement. You would know that this story will be a good one. But the story line is speeding sometimes, but anyways is good. And the Japanese attack names gets me sometimes, definitely don't know the meaning, if the author could work on using English then it's okay. The flipping between POV was handled quite well although too constant but okay. Sometimes normal POV may suffice if needed, well you're the author. Good story, hoping for more updates 👍
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