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Reborn As Harry Potter

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作者: Profound1

3.34 (50 レビュー結果)

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Rebooted as "Harry Potter Transmigration"


An 18 years old boy has just finished reading what he found as the most annoying series of books ever: the Harry Potter Series. There were two reasons for his annoyance with the series.

One: our MC was also named Harry Potter and he was greatly teased by it.

Two: the main characters in the books were seriously underdeveloped.

"I mean come on, an average guy defeats the most powerful evil wizard alive? Who are you kidding?"

P.S. I do not own Harry Potter. This is purely fan-fiction.

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HEHAASS

I have read till chapter 7 (there are only chapters till now) I found it somewhat interesting at first then dropped it. The mc disowning the system was already very annoying enough but in the latest chapter he tells the professor about the magic particles. I especially don't like it when the mc reveals all the things that he has learned. Harry potter being a patriotic fuk was already enough for me. I am done bye.

6yr
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neobenmike

Basically edgelord harry, with angst for days and with hints of underage flirting and that is pretty much it....................................................................

6yr
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Eddicted

Reading these comments i have feeling that even the author might be a kid.i mean which story in the world can be this horrible other than the ones scribbled by kid.

6yr
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Kilian
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I love this novel and at the moment this is the best Harry Potter fiction! The story and characters are fun, the canon is not followed completely but new characters are introduced and they offer a refreshing insight into the magical world. The only thing that is limiting this novel is the way the author removed the system (It is reintroduced later on, so don't worry!!!!!). Harry seemed to be too emotional at that time, but even that can be explained, although I am not really a fan of the "he was very stressed out so he got emotional" trope. Overall, this novel deserves a far better rating than it currently has and the only reason for this is because people gave low ratings after the system was shutdown earlier. So don't be influenced by angry reviews but judge for yourself and see the brilliance and potential of this novel.

6yr
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Reynerio1996

................................................................................................................................................................................................... deactivate your system, just because you had an existential crisis lol.......................................................................................

6yr
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GGMissFortune

writer gives MC a system but then takes away the system because it'll be too stronk and overshadow MC's hard work... 😕🤔 hmm maybe dont gib a system then...

6yr
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Durruti
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I am bored of all system tramas, all of system is trash they are al op and is boring to read. They only need to farm points and they are op and they have no competition so is not really interesting and all the mc have a **** of mind, i like harry potter novels but you trash the novel adding a system and the memories of all books it is enough for create a op mc so i really dont see the need for that ****.

6yr
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Lopipp

Nothing redeemable about this fanfic. Poorly written, certain characters behave way too immaturely, while others seem to have an insight to match seasoned therapists despite being 11 years old.

6yr
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Ptitkactus

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6yr
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animetraveller2002

So far it has been pretty good.I love your writing style.Please keep writing and I will 100% keep reading every chapter you post.Thank you.I am really looking forward to this.Also please make Harry OP.

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henrique195

Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap,

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EnDeNd

Don't like the character main character I didn't make it past the second page so I don't know if it gets better or worse but I'm just not interested in it

6yr
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Predaotr

It's not bad novel, but too similar in some parts to other HP fanfic. Unfortunately this novel isn't that good as the other one :) didn't read all chapters, so maybe it's better in later chapters, but I can't find it in myself to read more of them.

6yr
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Warley

Meeh so basicily os too clichê , system off, MC pussy cry, dad is a mysterios being **** man This is só clichê ALL stories .... People dont have Brain to creat anithing diferent soo for my is a 0. Br que quiser ler fica dica, acho que não vale a pena ;() desativou sistema , papai eh quem mato ele kkkkk que ideia viajou muito o maluco ... Ps: if you like This shit dont hate me .....

6yr
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MovingCorpse

I think this novel is quite a nice one, it has potential to develop further. Hoping that author will be able to finish the story. At least don't drop it pls...

6yr
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Trillionaire100

Wow this writing is good .It's just the first chapter yet it got me hooked . But if you are going to enter HP world then do magic nothing less will interest the readers man i like your writing style even if it need a a little more improvement however that could be ignored as it is actually a fanfic for now ... I m definitely going to follow it if you continue writing this ... Wanna see how far you can keep my interest.

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Emu_Lator

Unble to read beyond chapter 8. Horribly written. Cast is acting out of character and speaking opposite how they would normally doin the movies or books, the mc is an idiot

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dragonstorm09

I. hope you can come back and start updating this story again ill send power stones this storys great I've never seen a harry potter becoming harry potter with a system before just hp to hp stories

3yr
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Daoist_kit15

As it ended with the disown system the novel began to turn into a horrendous change Even the plot armour will be change if the system cannot be use.

3yr
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SOMBRIO

É um bom livro, a história avança rapidamente ,um pouco bagunçado no sistema ,tem uma mudança rápida de personalidade, a ideia das 3 opções de roteiro é legal,faltou mostrar mais a ideias malucas kkk

4yr
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