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Reborn As Gilderoy Lockhart

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What Happens When Power Hungry Man Reborns In
HARRY POTTER UNIVERSE? He Becomes STRONGEST Wizard.Follow The Man As He Adventures The World He Thought He Knew But Is In For Surprise.
THIS IS FAN FICTION BASED ON JK ROWLING'S WORK.
NOTE: THERE WILL BE DIFFERENT MAGIC SYSTEM, ARCANE MAGIC,SELFISH MC.
THIS IS MY FIRST TIME WRITING SO PLEASE TELL ME IF THERE IS TO DO ANY IMPROVEMENT
I WILL TRY TO UPLOAD AS MUCH CHAPTER AS I CAN

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amaturewriter

Paragraphs...pls just separate the paragraphs and dialogues otherwise this would cool but come on author, why do u just seperate the paragraphs and dialogues, its easy....Reason I say is cause its really hard to read....So pls just fix the structure, otherwise stories interesting

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StellarJade

Now most times the grammar isn't a critical point for me to enjoy a story, but this, this is more that just 'bad', this is atrocious. The synopsis gives you a good idea of what to expect.

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Chaitanya_Kulkarni

shameless author here.so going to give myself full 5 stars. but you do not do this please give your honest opinion.thank you. Have nice day..........................................................................................................................>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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MfrnA
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There is more to HP world............................................................................................................................................................................👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Juwon_Oh

At first I thought it was a reboot of another fanfic, however I liked the originality of the fanfic. I wish the author would release 19 chpts a day, but dreams will stay dreams. The updates are daily which is a plus. I hope you continue to write this fanfic.

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Phoenix1998

Great story. Cant wait to read more. excited.Great story. Cant wait to read more. excited.Great story. Cant wait to read more. excited. Great story. Cant wait to read more. excited.

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adeskenjin

excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story excellent story

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Jack_Phantomhive

Love this so far. Look forward to reading more. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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skulputulurubug

Okay, as a reader on HP fanfics, I'd just like to comment.... witches and wizards are dumb, the guild idea was interesting but you should've made it exclusive to pure bloods or the highest ranks can only be held by the pure. If you need to ask why, they live in a society based on blood status. Repeating my point witches and wizards are dumb, their society is ruled by pure bloods who have always lived with magic they're spoiled rotten by the convenience of magic that expecting them to have common sense and live with logic is a dumb concept. Now 2nd hand magic books and notes more likely you'll get muggleborn or halfbloods used books, purebloods feel so superior it's highly doubtful you'll find anything useful that you wouldn't learn more than you'll learn in Hogwarts. I know you want to be unique but please don't forget witches and wizards are dumb. Important things need to be repeated thrice

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Phoenix1998

This story is looking good. Great potential. Cant wait to read more.This story is looking good. Great potential. Cant wait to read more.This story is looking good. Great potential. Cant wait to read more.

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1Dreamer_Owl

good novel.... author will you store this novel or was it abandoned? . 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

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Phoenix1998

Excited to see hogwarts arc. Cant wait for more.Excited to see hogwarts arc. Cant wait for more.Excited to see hogwarts arc. Cant wait for more.Excited to see hogwarts arc. Cant wait for more.

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Phoenix1998

So he killed him The cannon will be changed slightly now. Great story. Cant wait to read more. excited. Great story. Cant wait to read more. excited. Great story. Cant wait to read more. excited.

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Rollbar89

Thanks for the novel! I'm totally liking it! Please don't drop it !

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Phoenix1998

Nice story. Cant wait to read more.Nice story. Cant wait to read more.Nice story. Cant wait to read more.Nice story. Cant wait to read more.

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Uncle_Sheogorath

Not too bad. I would have given it a higher rating if not for the atrocious amount of text after text I had to read without any paragraphs. Please use paragraphs! Perhaps edit your previous chapters as well to not scare away and blind your potential readers. Good luck.

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I like this story and how it is going.continue the story waiting for more chapters.if possible make it a harem.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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