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MC reincarnated in TDG world as Shen Yue, the evil fiance of the city lord's daughter, Yi Zi Yun. He tried to think of ways to survive in this world as he uses his future knowledge of his family's ruin.
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Note: I do not own the characters. I have also written parts of this in fanfiction site a couple years ago with title Tales of Demons and Gods Spoof. I am rewriting this here.
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This Fanfic was great the mc is an reincarnated villain who never really had relevance later on the story. The author completely changed his fate and I like the mc's attitude and he is likeable. Overall good story
I like how the MC is not cocky and doesn't think that he can do whatever he wants. Also like how people react to Nei Li's behaviour as it's absurd that he talks to City lord and how he calls him father in law even when there were no problems between Zi and MC.
what a disappointment Male lead I really hate his personality. he is a coward his golden finger Is waste on him . people keep provoking him but he just ignored it so other people want to sympathize on him .what a Trash! and he likes on licking girls becoming a tool is his expertise
very good and fun, not to mention that the author doesn't take long to advance the story, please continue don't stop, but just keep ninger and yang xin as wives
I like this ff so far. The MC is 'completely' original, but the other character's personalities are very similar to the original story, except for Yang Xin; she is the unique problem of the story. I don't like her. However, the remainder is great.
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This story is just ok. When is say ok i mean it's just average. There is no story development outside of skimming the main plot points, 0 character development for any characters, og mc has regressed from ultimate big brain to a petty child just to create tension to see if the Si mc and him will fight/ steal Og mc's girl, the plot is impossible to understand unless you are reading or have read what the original story which is not that bad but comes off as lazy and is confusing unless you can naturally fill in the gaps between the months worth of time that are covered in just a couple of chapters Conclusion: 4/10 would recommend to someone looking for popcorn entertainment that remember most of the original story
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Okay so here's the gist of it; -There isn't much misspelling though there could have been some explanation for some words and the technicalities for those who don't know 'Tales of Demons and Gods' and 'Library of Heaven's Path'. -The updates where consistent except for the last month, though I don't blame the author cause' it probably has something to do with life. -The development of the story is good, though the plot and relationship could have been slowed down or started differently, its still amazing nonetheless. -The characters description that the author provides is a bit lacking though it could be worse, at least you could have described their clothing and/or features. -The Background is still quite the same as the original so an average score is given Overall I think the story is good enough for people to read. It is enjoyable and interesting on how the MC does things as Shen Yue and tries to get strong and survive. This is the second ToDaG fan-fiction that I have read and it doesn't fall far behind it either in terms of being enjoyable.(The first one is titled 'Transmigrated in Tales of Demons and Gods' by Wise_Snail)
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while it have good concepts and the logic behind on this fanfic is good enough i think there many thing can make it better, the mc here is hypocrite while he not the mc here he act and do think that any mc from xianxia do. is more like a recap of TODG than and fanfic for me, basicaly search important even than change it with him as MC. there barely any conversation in chapter, most of chapter contain a sort explanation what he do and there barely telling of the affect he done to the plot except what he planned to do. there no any important fight or training detail but more like heaven library and instant power up mention in some couple sentence. the character is is barely feel there because the character interaction is almost none only the result of what MC do. there no struggle at all what i see is just mc try to change the plot but there nothing change in timeline as he start to changing many thing. he change the result but there no significant change in future even.
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Dont you fukin Dare drop this bro This is my fav tgd fanfic Please add the tags too so people can find it easily I wish you would update faster and write more words I like how the Story is going except yang xin other characters had reason to be with mc even tho i love ninger more But no doubt the way you made development with ziyun it had me Loving That
dear author it's a great novel and I am sure that many other readers liked this novel so man plz don't drop or Haitus this novel and complete it. and man atleast write 150 or 180 chapter before you complete it and best of luck and may God keep inspiring you for new ideas for this novel
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El mejor fanfic, de la ciudad gloria, aguardo por mas. Lo recomiendo, que le de un golpe en la cara, a nie li lo odio [img=faceslap] Escribir 140 caracteres es demasiado, deberian revisar eso. El mejor fan fic.
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This is seriously good. Besides the fact that the start is really rushed, which the author said he would fix, I don't really see any problem. Overall, extremely enjoyable. For me at least
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heads up 5 chps in..... CD is more or less completely bland. MC is harem seeking...thats his goal. [ tag not there ]. other than that no personality. he does what OG MC did, to get one chick, and also another [ a heiress and a manager at the alchemy place ]. I wouldnt call MC smart cause he is following nei lie but not completely cause he dosnt want to [ my guess follow cannon. ]. CD as I said before is practically no existent. the MC fks the alchemy chick for the first time within hrs of meeting cause she drunk and she totally fine..no depression, or normal reactions. plot forced I guess. MC also does what nei lie did to get the chick with the illness. He has no purpose or proper/interesting goals....he has OP power [ the library thing, libary of heavens path or something. srry if I am wrong, idk the name ] and becomes OP fast. Theres also the fact that MC alters cannon and yet everything happens exactly like that... ie: MC is the shen dude but dosnt antagonize with nei lie, he dosnt allow argument with neilie and teach to happen and he steals an artifact from the treasure hunt, prevents nei lie from showing off, he prevents interaction with sick chick... and yet cannon still follows. like sure, they aint that big but they were major plot points. its stupid to think cannon still follows. overall .5 chps in, CD is just not there.. a normal TDG FF with MC focuses on getting chick and gets them by doing what nei lie did, and following cannon. becoming OP fast cause of goldfinger
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