/ Fantasy / Rebirth of The Dragon Slayer
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In the heart of a desolate battlefield, A young man lay battered and wounded, his breaths shallow and laboured. The clash with the forces of darkness had taken its toll, and he knew his strength was waning. As the sun dipped below the horizon, a sinister figure emerged from the shadows, its towering form casting a foreboding presence over the fallen warrior—a Count Dragon.
Killian accepted the limit of his strength, ready to join his Fallen Comrades.
"Would you like to go back in time?", a voice whispered in his ears.
"Yes"
[Host has created a successfully created a contract with The Outer God]
"May you succeed, Human, or should i say, Outer",
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If you are looking for fast pace story line look no further. This is honestly a great novel. There are puctuation errors that could be fixed, such as differentiating thoughts and actual speech, especially when 'talking' to the system. But as soon as MC is reincarnated the storyline MOVES and does not stop. There honestly could be more background, but overall, this novel has potential.
Solid novel so far I definitely recommend checking it out if you like pure fantasy and reincarnation. looking forward to seeing where this story goes!
The story is good, the Punctuation and grammar are meh on the edge of bad and some words are missing and the Author is switching the places of paragraphs sometimes. Read your story more Author because sometimes it is good and sometimes I want believe you had a mini stroke writing some parts.
Author here!! Just reviewing my own novel:-> I hope you enjoy it. I will try to keep the power scaling in control so that readers dont feel like mc is some god. Also, i would love constructive criticism, so go ahead!