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Do you believe in Luck? If so, what is it actually? Hmm, Luck always follows the principle of probability... I mean, that's what a math teacher would say. But in fantasy, Luck might have some power to manipulate something.
This is a story of a 'Lucky' soul who got a second chance because of a random artifact, traveled back in time, and tried to change his future using his knowledge. No, not only did he try to change his future, but he also defied the Gods, Devils, and Demons and tried to change the law of the Universe. Did he succeed? Or did he fail? Let me take you on a miraculous adventure and present you with a unique story.
Warning!
It's a slow-paced novel.
[Author's Note: This is an edited version of the Rebirth of Abium novel. You guys can skip the book if you have already read it.]
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The writing quality is very good, you really can't complain about it, the story starts really great and it is fun to follow it, great writing style. The character is perfect too, not some dumb/pervert/ idiot mc, instead we get for once a mc which is smart. Update stability is good, could be better, like idk 10 chapters a day,😗😇. World background is good, we dont know much yet but I think we will uncover everything aas he story continues
great novel, well written and thought out overall; I have only 2 thibgs i think could be improved upon. First, more constant updates would be great if the quality isnt compromised. Second is a bit more attention to details, i will give an example: when abijm saves the prince from the light church's attack, theres a part where both he and the knights run towards the prince, the novel says he is 15 meters away from the knights so thwy qould need like 5 seconds to get to him.. how is that possible? thats like... even lower than a regular human walking speed?? i know it might seem irrelevant but this kibd of mistakes can pile up and its a bit frustrating to read. other than that great job author, keep it up
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The author did mature in his writings! I must say he was already that good 👍 The story was well elaborated and it didn't confuse me a little bit. I can also sense that the story will get better and better. The author's growth will not stop so we are rest assured 👍 Just don't stop writing and all readers will be pleased! 🙏
I've only read a few chapters so these are my initial thoughts. The power scaling is quite lame, at low levels, warriors should be able to kill mages, much less high-level fighters to magical beasts. They both use mana so why are the mages so over-glorified, if being a warrior is that weak compared to mages, why would anyone consider being one? The writing style and story so far are good though, I don't find it hard to keep engaged and can imagine the scene being told adequately.
i usually don't write reviews but this book deserves it. the writing quality unlike what others said so in the other reviews is kind of meh. now I am not an author nor is my English any better but I believe the author needs an editor because sometimes it's hard to read and you have to rearrange sentences to make any Sence of them. . . story wise it's really fking good. its the usual medieval fantasy with magic. MC is a regressore, someone who was little above a mob in his past life now using what he knows about the future to his advantage. the MC is likable and smart (not some aizen LV genius mind you)..all in all its a good story and I recommend it to anyone reading this review it won't disappoint you
The writing is absolutely great! I was pulled in with every paragraph! I normally don’t like most reincarination plotlines but from very the very first chapter I was interested. I recommend readers check this story out you won’t be disappointed.
I loved the story. But due to my phone battery that is 16%, I can not continue at the moment but the plot is interesting 😀 I would greatly accept your suggestions to improve my novel. Keep it up buddy.☺
yow, the first chapter got me hooked, and wanting to read more, I really want to see him get stronger. I like this kind of Novel like the reborn and reincarnation thing. keep it up author, your novel has potential, you deserve this 5/5 rating. I'll support you.
So Im just wondering Where you find the none Edited Version of this book ...............................................................................!
Chapter 3 and I can't help but love the story already. Because the author knows something most writers don't. How to give the protagonist goals he wants to achieve and stakes that make it challenging.
This is a masterwork novel and there's only a few like it in my opinion. The start of the novel is normal and maybe can be considered as boring but for those who decide to continue they will find the hidden treasure here...The MC is very powerful
A masterpiece. It is a very good novel, with the protagonist having quite a unique character development, it is a great experience to read this novel. Marvelous.
This story is a true work of art. The plot is very unique and different to the things I've read in the past. Anything can happen, so the readers are always at the edge of their seats. Great work Author!
THE BEST WRITTING STYLE...5/5 rating without a doubt, from the perfect set of words and grammars that form like an array who can easily hooked the minds of the readers,
great story. good pacing. good characterization. good dialog. the world building is a slow burn that builds up with every paragraph. no big info dumps.
First of all, I was pleasantly surprised by the grammar. There was barely any mistakes, and the diction was advanced and allows readers to visualize the world easily. It reminds me of classic DnD fantasy with modern touches. I'm looking forward to the story, keep it up!
Firstly, you have a great mind!! Excellent world description, imagination and character thoughts. The plot is quite interesting and goes much more interesting from chapter to chapter. Keep Going!!!
Excellent plot, the lead character aims to be powerful, smart, and calculated mind to get what he wanted or aspire. Worth reading. Guys, give it a try!
Author AK here, 5 stars for self-promoting. If you want a slow-paced novel with a fantasy setting, this one will pique your interest. The first two volumes are mostly about MC's adventure, but the plot will thicken during the third volume. Also, pay attention to the strange incidents in this novel. Hmm, that's it. MC won't be too smart, but not too dumb. He will be more like an average guy. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️Anbe Sivam (Love is God)❤️ ❤️ ❤️