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Rebirth Of A Serial Killer

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作者: Kotrem

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DISCLAIMER!!! - Please read my remake of ROSK! It's called Rebirth Of A Serial Killer *Remake* Updates Twice A Week !
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If you plan to read this book, just note that this book will not be continuing. Because of how poorly written this book was, I've decided to rewrite the novel. Under the same name, just "*Remake*" at the end. This synopsis goes to the new book.
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A youth around the age of 16 is a normal teenager with hobbies like anyone else. Though, his hobby includes killing people and leaving White Roses on their bodies. After multiple killings, the news and the media decided to label him ‘White Rose’.

Later, the police along with the government set out to capture White Rose. The police attempt to capture him multiple times but end up failing.

Finally, White Rose turns himself in but is later shot on the way to jail by a victim's father. White Rose wakes up in a new world in someone else’s body. His new body is named Zuhn Sheng and he is being hunted by every large Mortal Sect in the region because of his powers.

Follow Zuhn Sheng as he sets off on his journey to become stronger and explore his new profound powers, While sticking to his roots of being a skilled killer.

AN : This applies to the rewritten version of ROSK. The old chapters will be deleted once I have a good release rate along with a decent amount of chapters stocked up.

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Kotrem
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The author here, I'm not going to say my book is amazing. For sure at the beginning, it was quite rough. Lots of plot holes, I've been going through the starting chapters and rewriting a lot of them. I've fixed chapters 1-23. 24+ is pretty smooth, there shouldn't be any plot holes. In my perspective, my book started bad and has started to become better. My release schedule is going to be 2 chapters a day. I hope everyone enjoys my first long-term novel. (Meaning I didn't quit after ten chapters)

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ismellcandy

its a good light read especially if u like it a bit dark and love a bit of murder here and there okay im just filling the rest in::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

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DoggoInMyPicture

Actually an amazing book so far, I'm loving it more and more. Each chapter brings a new experience. Author keep it up! I really enjoy the psychopath type of books, if you are into them like me, then you will love this book.

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Kochii

I enjoy the story overall, it has an interesting plot line and I am able to fathom what kind of world the author is trying to create. The character design is okay, though I believe that the protagonist is TOO powerful, creating some sort of weakness or opponent the MC can’t defeat at first. I understand that a large premise of the story at this point is that he is such a high rank, surpassing everyone in the town he is currently in, but bringing that sort of conflict would make the story more enticing, getting readers wondering what will happen next. As for the plot, I like it, though I may be a tad biased because novels about killers and what not is my personal preference. I believe the author truly has something going, and I enjoy the different species and magical classes, etc. Though, I believe the author is throwing too much in the reader’s face too quickly. If the author wants the reader to TRULY understand how everything works, the importance of certain things (Cultivation & Ancient Magic Theory for example) they should take some time to explain it, it could be through dialogue, the MC reading that book that Scar pointed out when he said that only certain people can open, etc. The updates are quite frequent and the author truly does make an effort to update regularly, and makes the chapters longer than usual if they forget a day or have an extremely sparse chapter. The quality of writing is what may throw some people off of this otherwise fun read. The author will often use the wrong “to” or “there”, personally, I am not very bothered by this, but it could become confusing for other readers and makes the novel harder to read and take seriously. Before posting, it would be best if the author did a spell check on the chapter, determining if everything is correct. Overall, I would recommend this book once it has been more fleshed out, mostly because it is still very much beginning and there is a lot left to see and develop. 3.5 stars.

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KinkyAuthor

For some reason i really like these kind of intense scenes , makes me want to read more. But WHY AUTHOR,!!! WHY AUTHOR-KUN!!!!! I wish yo could update faster But unfortunatly rome wasnt built in a day TwT. KEEP WORKING HARD AUTHOR-KUN As long as i can still use internet i will read this

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ZyroTheCreator

I'm going to be writing an honest review of this book. For starters, this book isn't remotely perfect. It, of course, has many flaws that could be easily fixed by the author. The grammar throughout the whole book is okay, Chapters 1-10 on the other hand... Let's just say they look like you just past the fifth grade. Anyway, the character development is non-existence in the first volume. The characters are very 2d and have no emotion. Of Course, I know this story is about a serial killer. Yes, serial killers have no emotion, but that doesn't mean you make every character have no deep emotion. Next, we have my favorite. USELESS PEOPLE. Okay, people have talked about this in other reviews and in the comments. Let's all be honest here, Scar is so useless. Why is he even in the novel. How does one become a slave for someone randomly, then Zuhn thinks of him as an equal just because Scar helped him out. Charlotte, Not as useless as Scar but still useless. A random chick with a lot of power in a small town. Doesn't kill Zuhn, but later for SOME REASON gets scared of him. Legit no reason for her to become scared of him. If she is from some secret organization why is she scared of some random youth. Don't even get me started with the ****ty organization that she was in. No point in bringing her into it. Later they fight and they die, bs if you ask me. Thinking of Hencewood. What the **** is the point of the kid. Like, wtf? He's so useless he's worse than Scar. It's hard to be more useless than SCAR. Like, let's talk about this. This random rich kid hears that Zuhn killed/hurt his men. Tries to track him down, his men get killed. Now he random thinks Zuhn is some powerful guy that can be bought into his army. Like how does that work? Alright, let's stop with all of that. How about Windwood sect. Honestly, I don't understand what happened there. Like, why the **** did he become his disciple then just betray. Just because the guy had a slave doesn't mean he should betray. So stupid. Demon Wars, Like why the **** did you think that was a good idea? Like who thinks, "mmmm... Demons!" Fucking no one. The Demon war thingy was just filler chapters. The fighting scenes were dog****. No action just Zuhn stabbing them in the neck. Actually thinking about fighting scenes they were all dog****. Volume 2 Now, I'm not going to completely talk **** on the author. (I totally am.) Volume 2 is WAYYYYY better. Think of volume 1 as wet dog**** and think of Volume 2 as Dried Dog****. (Picking up wet dog**** is the worst, Dry on the other hand isn't that bad.) Volume 2 was a huge upgrade to the book. The Chapters actually made fucking sense. They were made by someone with autism. The characters were tons better! 3d ish, still kinda 2d but better than the first volume. Chapters are a lot longer and more descriptive. The ancient trial went on for fucking years. Waste of time tbh. Anywho the book is getting better and better as the author listens to his readers. Real Ratings of this book. Writing Quality Volume 1 - 2.5 Stars (Dog****) Volume 2 - 4.0 Stars (Not Dog****) Stability Of Updates Volume 1 - 5 Stars (Uploaded everyone day) Volume 2 - 2.5 Stars (Doesn't Update worth ****) Story Development Volume 1 - 1 Star (There wasn't any) Volume 2 - 3.5 Stars (At least there was some) Character Design Volume 1 - 1 Star (What Character Design?) Volume 2 - 3 Stars (There is some) World Background Volume 1 - 3 Stars (Eh, It's okay) Volume 2 - 4.5 Stars (Better than Volume 1) Coming to a total rating of Volume 1 - 2.4ish Volume 2 - 3.2ish Now the reason I'm giving my stars much higher on the site. Mostly become this book needs more people to read it. And well SOMEONE review bombed this novel. So, ima just going to make it a 5 Star review. If you are a long time reader you will understand. Make me the TOP review!

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Burning_Black_Rose

Ruthless, evil and overpowered main character who's passion for killing never dies. Even after he does. Story development hooks you and it doesn't let go. A must read if you like a darker and more sinister take on cultivation novels. I enjoy reading this novel . Can't wait for the next chapters .

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Suicidal_landfish

A story of an op torture loving psychopath who would make a good cult leader....with magic (Read to cp 39) The story is pretty good, but sometimes you see the author “clash” with the mc, making the mc do things that he would probably not do (then again a lot better then most with this), but usually he does not get out of “character” But I would say the worst part of it is the mc’s power is his “power ups” lack of “reason”.... I think he should have had a cost or at least “cult-like” sacrifices to gain or use the power, but that is just my opinion

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qpid_shi

I love love love it😃😄 Thank you author, the plot of the story is amazing and Zuhn is unstoppable which makes me love the story even more😆 the way you describe the story is something that makes the persons blood boil by reading it😆 Please keep up the good work and remember to take care of yourself two🤗

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gujumpio

At first Zuhn was a ruthless killer, killing people for fun but after teleporting to ziom continent he has some sparks of mercy for his disciples.. But again after transporting to another world he iz same as first emotionless killer.. But still story iz outstanding

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DoggoInMyPicture

This book is getting better and better. The more I read the better it gets. The plot is a lot more complex then it was before. The characters are starting to develop more. I would have to agree volume one the characters were 2d for sure. Now, however, the characters are starting to become alive. For sure it's not perfect, but it's way better than it was before. I would highly recommend this book to anyone that enjoys psychological novels. Best one I've read on this website!

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DoggoInMyPicture

The book keeps getting better an better. The first volume had its problems, but it's been better. The second volume is long and I love the long chapters. Please Don't drop the novel, I always can't wait to read it.

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This is a great book I have come across with a great plot. The story building is slow and gradual. There are times when one can get confused on what's going on but as you continue reading you get the real meaning or authors thought. This is a violent story which involves too much blood and killings. But is a great thriller and keeps the reader occupied. This is so far the best book I have read/reading.

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Bulljv
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Obviously a work in progress. But I like the premise and I want to see where the author takes this story. It's dark and twisted and different enough to make me want to read more. I look forward to more chapters and watching the author develop his craft.

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marveya

The book is nice. The MC is really edgy in my opinion, not that I'm complaining though cause I have no problem with edgy MC's if they are written well. Which the author tried to do, though not really well.

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milk_chocolatte

I just started reading this now and i think its an amazing book. The title is quite catchy and the cover is also pleasing to the eye. Would definitely recommend to anyone

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Artem_Trey

dude I'm not here to hate on you, i just started, stopped on chapter 10 or something. There's no spelling errors, the translation is ok, the english level fine. But its just that weird way you use vocabulary and grammar that just irks me, the fact that i have to repeatedly try and figure out which phrases you meant to use is waaay too tiring, i just wanted something chill to pass the time. As for your so called plot holes, the cops in your book are dumb af, just throw a few rounds of tear gas into his cell, also just shoot him with tranqs. And i know you're probably gonna explain more about him as the story progresses but if I'm 10 chaps in and i know nothing about him other than the fact that he kills, loves it just as much as putting roses on bodies which is another thing i dont get, then you're definitely doing something wrong. I dont care about his whole life story i just wanna know who he is, his train of thought, you know, the simple things. Oh and one last thing regarding the way you write twisting phrases or botching up use of vocabulary . "not allowed to open it" and "can't open it are two very different things ". Fiddling with a knife in your pocket... My point is i feel like punching you mostly coz i somehow think you're mocking me with these mistakes . The book has promise though

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