/ Anime & Comics / Rebirth in DanMachi
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Adalwulf Holt, a norwegian teenager, died while saving a little girl from a drunken driver. God, needing another replacement, gave him a second shot at life.
How will Adalwulf deal with the danger in this world? Will he survive the lair of the beasts, the Dungeon? Can he handle the tricky methods of the many Gods?
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Second work for now!
I spent around two hours just editing the cover image. I hope you guys think it looks cool.
I hope you all give this the same support as my other work, "Rebirth in Haikyuu!"
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I created a discord server for this FF!
https://discord.gg/W9bFnPE
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I understand why you wrote the chapters about wakanda but it ruined the story for me. just comes out of nowhere and ruins whatever plot was going on since this is literally isnt in danmachi and doesnt make sense. wakanda forever but not in this fanfic. wouldve rated higher if it was an omake or whatever but not if it is part of the story
I think it's nice. Better than the Haikyuu fanfic imo, mostly because sports don't tend to keep a wondering mind like a fantasy combat setting would. The author is really good, he or she doesnt rely on filler chapters to keep the illusion that the author hasn't hit an authors block. Filler chapters also aren't used as an intermission or to give a period before new information is dumped. Speaking of info dumps even tho currently there's only 12 chapters I don't think I've seen a crazy info dump that disguises itself as a chapter, instead of seen sprinkles of the information needed to actually understand the world in manageable amounts that don't clutter the story flow or immersion resulting in dissatisfaction that nothing happened and that you learned nothing important that you will remember.
The writing is not bad, especially for this site, however the MC is incredibly cringe and yet all the women fawn all over him despite knowing him for a whole 5min. If you like wish fulfillment and narcisistic MCs give it a go. I have to give it a pass...
I was kind of hoping for something different so when it got to where Hestia was introduced and he wants to join her familia, I thought well here we go again so I quit. So manyfanfics always go that route and next was probably getting Hestia and Ain Wallenstein in his harem. Nothing against that I mean that's the normal formula for DanMachi fanfic, I just hoped this wouldn't be the norm. GL my dude.
At first the novel was good, even if it was Harem for no reason. Then this weak drama appeared to us. I am disappointed in this novel.......
Its been amazing so far. No unnecessary fillers like training for 5 whole chapters. I have high expectations for this since its on par with the author's other work. Keep up the good work!!
the story is good, but the MC is a stupid pu-ssy, he is just too much of a good-hearted man, he speaks of not killing and being understanding to his enemies, if you like this type of MC this the story for you
Maybe it’s just me, but it feels like 90% picking up girls and about their emotions. Don’t misunderstand me, the harem theme can work out, but 6+ love interests in 22 chapters is more than fast and the actual story (dungeoneering) might lack at some point. Don’t take it to heart, it’s just my impression that the focus might be a bit too much on collecting women. They might give the impression of being only one of his women instead of an individual. Writing quality: 5. It’s in the upper end for fanfiction on this site. Updating stability: 5. 1-2 chapters a day. Story development: 3. The story centers around growing his harem and a bit dungeoneering. The first part lacks depth and the second is too small as of yet imo. That might and probably will change in the future. Character development: 3. Nothing to say to the existing characters. New ones are often inspired by others, but it’s clear the author put some thought into their status. Love interests need some more individuality. The Mc has a hero complex but this might work in Danmachi and didn’t influence my rating. World background: 5. Nothing outstanding to say about that. It’s Danmachi and I didn’t spot any big mistake about that. I’m a fan of some originality, but it is not a necessity. Overall score: 4.2
The main character is OP and so is the rest of his Familia. So far I've seen no rehashing of the Bell plot of saving Lily or meeting Welf. Instead, we are treated with a whole new cast of OCs to round out the Hestia Familia. Currently, none of them have gone through any major character development, but time will tell if they amount to anything beyond filling out the roster.
I only read until chapter 5 but I already know that it is very good it continues brother. v
Bonjour ! o/ Je souhaite que vous puissiez continuer a écrire car c'est certainement la meilleur réadaptation de Danmachi que j'ai jamais lu !
Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Well, I liked the way the writing was, how smooth the events were, and the way the girls were gathered without making the situation look like forcing it, so you have my support.
Keep up the good work, I love it so far! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
so far so good i'm enjoying it a lot and hope to see more so please don't drop!.......................................................................................................................................
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Hello author! I want to take permission to translate into Russian, and put your work on another site. Your work is the best! Top! I love and look forward to the release of chapters more often. ꉂ (ˊᗜˋ *) ♡. P. S. GrandAdmiralKizaru. P. S.S. The frequency of chapters would be released every day.)) Your work would break everyone. I didn't like the fact that the first time I managed to earn 1,000,000 valis. But I admit, some people are too lucky. So I closed my eyes to that. What can I say. Your work is the best for me. The main character is handsome, not like the hero from ENDLESS PATH: INFINITY COSMOS. There the main character, the freak and the chicks stick to him. Have you seen the cover of the novel? Here he is. BUEEEE. P. S. S. S. GOOD LUCK THE AUTHOR IN WRITING THE CONTINUED. MUSES! LIVES!