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Alekzi told me to re-upload my novel after taking a look at it, so I did...
In the re-upload, I'll be fixing all the plot holes in the beginning, and I'll also be changing Worthy's name and a bunch of other stuff. I'll summarize it when I start uploading new chapters on Friday again.
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Not really my kind of story. Everyone is either a psychopath or dead, and the gods mess around with the MC way too much for my liking. Not to mention the MC claims to have created the perfect game which is better than all the others, I can't agree with that so far.
the writing quality is good and the story is kind of captivating, The work has been well done and the choices of word is way better. There just few things I would sat-Keep it up!
It's a good book hands down. The writer's choice of descriptions and words as well as how the plot unravels is amazing. I definitely recommend it!
Very impressed with the authors captivating choice of words. Well done. An amazing story with an even more amazing author! Congrats on an amazing story!
The main protagonist developed his own game and after 10 years, his journey finally began. I like how the Author make the MC relatable when it comes to his struggle in life. Writing quality is flawless, story development is amazing and character design is fantastic! I truly enjoyed reading the novel. A page turner novel, interesting and above all the Author is talented! Well done!
No grammar issues. Writing is good and love how he describes the game and the emotions of his character when he couldn’t use the cool nicknames he thought of, because they were all taken. I know that feeling all too well lol. Good book so far.
I really like first person novels and although I find most 3rd person novels to be more on the side of world building whereas first person novels have better character development, I find that this novel is a capable of both. I find it inspiring that a novel can incorporate so much such as adding different races such as demons, humans, beast-men and more. Having such a diverse group in one story can be sometimes confusing but I find that the author writes the story in such a way where it is comprehensible. Definitely a good read.
Really great concept so far I’ still in chapter 1 but has already captivated me.🤩🤩 So give the story a try, And if you don’ like it o well better luck next time
Very very good………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..extremely good………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
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Hey guys, I'm just going to give my novel 5 stars like all other authors do. Also, don't be afraid to write scathing comments if my work isn't good, I'll try my best to fix any complaints you guys have (Although I hope my work isn't THAT bad). Anyways, thanks y'all for reading and enjoy the novel.