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The stories about high school students. who asleep while his pc game still on.
When he wake up suddenly he was in a fantasy world as his game Character that, he playing for 4 years!
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The story is straight up amazing but the translator's grammar is sh*t. But he's still supplying us with a quality isekai, so we got that going for us. (Yes I did assume -his- gender. BE OFFENDED!!!)
it's somewhat interesting but the character are too bland and dull and the story is going too fast , like you're doing a marathon.These are my true and honest opinion , if you want to know
The grammar is a slog. It’ll make any grammar nazi shoot themselves and any sane person a grammar nazi. Because the character is built in the early chapters before the story moves along it kinda suffers, but like any good writer you can watch this author improve with every chapter. A good read. Just bite down on a stick for the first few chapters
This is cliche story about man being transported to another world! But still its refreshed and i just kinda like read it more. Keep train ur writing skills by add more chapters
The story is interesting. But somehow the grammar is quite bad. Maybe if you improve the grammar this book will become popular. ...... .............................
Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
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I love it! This book is so unique and addicting I hope there will be more chapters in the near future. Keep it up!!! 💙❤️✅🙏🤩😘😁 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Many thanks, author! And you readers this novel is awesome, read it you will enjoy it.
so many grammatical errors.. please edit your chapters before posting it.. so many grammatical errors.. please edit your chapters before posting it.. so many grammatical errors.. please edit your chapters before posting it.. so many grammatical errors.. please edit your chapters before posting it.. so many grammatical errors.. please edit your chapters before posting it..
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Op is like my first name. Whenever I read novel I always wanted them to be op cause I don't want to see anything bad happen to him or anyone he know. I just really like happy ending.
It will be cool if I know when he's thinking lol. You can use [ this when his thinking. It will improve your novel a little bit, i think.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Good good this is a good novel. I always wanted to make a light novel like this one but comeing up with a background is so troublesome.😁😁😁😁😁😁😊😊😊😊
Standard story about being transported to another world with OP powers . Could be quite good if not for terrible grammar . the style of writing also could use some "upgrades " cause i feel like i am reading something written by 12 year old . could be good story - but for now dont recomend reading .
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 Is a good story' the grammar is a little bad, but you can improve it along your story' Good luck 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 keep up the good work
This is the first time I wrote novel that I want for so long! Of course I will rating with full✩! I didn't recommend this Novel because my writing English is like elementary schooler maybe worse than that hehe..