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My thoughs(Skip this if you dont care)
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This is a random fanfic i felt like writing.Lately i'v been reading lots of these and could not hold back my urges.This is why this is created.
Like many system reincarnation fanfics,there will be multiple worlds and the character shall be Op(With System).
Uploads would be based on moods and length of chapters would mostly vary.
(I'm not a machine that can pump out many chapters of high word counts so please don't expect that of me)
This story would mostly be for fun (A.k.a for the lols and hence would have a record amount of cliches so feel free to get triggered)
Please build constructive feedback and give suggestions to the world he gets transported to.
Real synopsis?
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Our Mc,Karma Toketsuki dies due to a Car accident.He meets god and with 6 wishes and a system in hand,watch(read) as he does whatever he wants in the worlds he goes to.
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Cover page does not belong to me I just got it from: https://picsum.photos.
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Life is precious my friends it is given by God, we are not perfect no one has it. I know that the tough teachers are bad, classmates who this is like the leader of a gang, he There are some everywhere, if you are intimidating, if you make call to call the good teachers the said in has your relatives, friends, family or even police, before thinking about the suicide to contact the samu of your home to see if they can help you of your suicidal crisis.You still have a long life to live, to find love, to generate heirs of your blood, to spread your family. Senior I am younger than you 2 years old I understand you the pressure all that but do not commit suicide.You can become an author who would exceed novels, anime, manga can be become a rich have fools of others who judge us, we live as we want my father is an example he did not go to college, high school and he still lives well, so author live your life and die of old age at the age of 80, on the bed of the hospital.
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*Author trying to give honest review. Shamless author that tries to be honest.Writing stability is not that high as i write this story for fun.For world background,I am leaching off of other anime worlds so...yea.English is my first language so mistakes would be kept to a bare minimum (I often reread and edit chapters to remove el mistakes).If there is any please point it out to improve the quality of the novel.For story,I have things planed out for the first world so it should be alright.The story will be improving(I hope) so stay tuned for that i guess.
for those who want to rate this fanfic so low pls rethink what you are doing this is the last legacy of pass away bullied victim. and here the last note of the author that got removed (https://wuxia world.world/random-fanfic-about-anime-with-a-system/chapter-129-ending-note-for-the-direction-of-the-story-note-1153541748916178) pls remove all space between wuxia world.
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Writing Quality- Better than your average webnovel fanfictions (o3o) Chapter release- Godly! \(*0*)/ Story Development- I personally like The time skips and the focus on the important events in the original story (^-^)
Wish fulfilment novel with a very OP character. The story is pretty rushed. The characters are 1D especially the love interest. The auther did give one chapter to her in the one piece arc but still she feels like a doll. Also time skips galore.
I see the Anime world (No game No life) one of my favorite anime's, i still haven't seen, a fanfic of that anime here in webnovel. this is the first so ill give you 5 star review 😌
Standard wish fulfillment fan fiction. If you want to place yourself in the shoes of an outrageously overpowered character in a setting that has no real rhyme nor reason then you'll probably enjoy it. Nothing in the story irked or irritated me it's just more of the same. Writing quality - 3 stars. It is just about at the average level of writing for this site. Some mistakes in grammar etc but nothing unforgivable. Stability of updates 5 stars. Looking at the TOC the chapters seem to get released at a rather impressive rate. Story development and world background - 1 star each. They are just recycled more or less from the original piece of work and other standard reincarnation/wish fulfillment/system settings. Character design - 2 stars. I somewhat enjoyed some of the traits of the MC but the characters, including the MC, are basically the same reasons as story development and world background.
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF. untuk penulis karena dia sudah meninggal dan dia bunuh diri. bagi yang ingin membaca catatannya ini gw kasih linknya :https: // Wuxia world.world/ random-fanfic-about-anime-with-a-system/chapter-129-ending-note-for-the-direction-of-the-story-note-1153541748916178 JANGAN LUPA UNTUK MENGHILANGKAN SPASI DISANA
Sería mejor que el MC retenga a los amigos de milonga asta el final para llevarlos de viaje también el siguiente arco podría ser danmachi ,yigi oh, date a love,big Scholl dxd, konosuba
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This is a pretty good fan fic only problem is its hard to find and probably because of low view rates is dropped kinda wish it is continued tho
There are countless animes with countless sexy girls, but the author decided to bend the floors. Very bad choice. Thrown. Only for the global background can I put 5 stars, since these are already built worlds
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I think the story is good but the story is rushed and the writer skips time frame too much if the story was not rushed then it might be pretty dame good .but nice try to the author
Cara se voce vai fazer um harem pelo menos deixe o mc dormir com a mulheres porque o cara pelos anos que ele ja passou nos outros mundos ele tem mais de 50 anos e ainda e virgem se ele nao dorme com a mulher ela nao e mulher dele e pelo que vejo so estao passeando juntos e qual o motivo do casamento se eles continuam virgens e melhor arrumar outros homens pra dormir com elas.
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It's very rushed, empty characters, typical story to turn off the brain because it will give you a span, the story itself is interesting, but misbehaved, since it seems that a 10 year old boy with delusions of greatness is writing
Well, the theme of this novel is very fun, I personally love the idea of jumping in my favorite animes with overwhelming power and just playing around. But there is one killer flaw in the novel for me that makes me a bit sad, that flaw is the rushed nondescriptive feeling to the chapters. I get the feeling that I'm hearing a quick story from a friend during break time. I honestly love the thematic but the complete lack of consistency in the description and progression of the story disappoints me. I believe that if the author is willing to backtrack and redo this novel using these chapters as a basis or a skeleton and from them work a more complete body for the story, then this novel could become one of the best fanfictions I have ever seen since this marvelous approach at the thematic is rarely seen done right.