/ Fantasy / prodigy hero in dc
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There was a person who always thought to be differently from others.
His name was David Findora. David always pursed to be the best in life
David was a naturally borned prodigy who entered collage at the age of 15,was talented in muiltple sports and was stronger and faster than the average person
David later died at the age of 27 due to overusing his mind
David reborns in the dc world, but different from the comices.
follow David on his adventures in dc
if this novel is similer to others please tell me
I do not own any of these character's
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the idea is good but the MC is too fast Looks like you've forgotten that a baby's body is at its limits, c'est impossible dans la vrai vie. And this thing of becoming friends with Superman is a idiot, The guy was friends with lex luthor for years and never told him and spent all this friendship lying to him, same for Kara to Lena. Superman is arrogant and loves to show off, he could have saved so many lives with krypton technology but he preferred to show himself in costume, so stupid idea, I would have thought the MC was going to follow his voice knowing the mistakes made by members of the Justice League.
JUST AMAZING! DONT DROP PLEASE!!! just read the thing. It has amazing potential. I'm on chapter 3 and still want more. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T DROP!!