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[COMPLETE] "I would give you everything, there is nothing in this world I wouldn't do to ensure your happiness.
I'll cherish every part of you. Because without you beside me I can't survive."
(Part of a series: This is Book 1/3)
The Year 4014
Have you ever wonder how does it feel to be a Princess? Is it nice and fun or...actually not?
Sadly for Lyn being a Princess isn't as nice as fairytales described. She is an abandoned Princess bearing a 'cursed' birthmark.
Her mother the Queen isolates her, Lyn becomes the most unloved Princess. What can she do in this situation?
Only study, study and study so one day she can be free from this cage. Lyn thought that she will live her dull life like this for a long time until...
A young man from the Sound Kingdom comes into her life like a prince riding a white horse. But, he's actually a thief.
His name is Kazuya. He brought new colours to her monochrome life, introducing her to many 'first' times.
Sweet, gentle and kind but what if it's all just an act for hidden motives? Is the affection he showed her...genuine?
What will happen between the two youngsters trapped in love-cage? What is the mystery hidden behind the birthmark? Can the two of them unite in such a chaotic world?
Watch as Lyn begin her love journey on a thorny path haunted by dark politics and bitter life.
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Part of "Lyn Journey" series
(1) Princess Lyn: Fleeting Dreams (COMPLETE)
(2) Queen Lyn: Clash Of Kingdoms (ongoing)
(3) Empress Lyn: The Last Age
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Going to give the author five stars, I know writing quality can be improved. But in contrast to her first story she's gotten so much better 👍 extra star for her efforts. Normally I break down my reviews, but since there's not a lot of chapters.. - If you've read QLCK you'll notice the contrast between the Lyn from when she's 22 and the present time frame for Princess Lyn when she's sixteen. Here we get a glim**e of the vague mysteries surrounding Lyn from Queen Lyn. Actually reading them alongside each other is quite fun, since you can connect the pieces. - The ML, on the other story he hasn't shown up yet. So I'm glad to see him at last. As usual the author does a great job describing her characters thoughts and feelings. - World Background: Only advice is to do it in small chunks, no need to rush. - This story has the potential to get into top rankings if the author maintains a balanced pace.
Like the author mentioned this story is part of a series. While Queen Lyn Clash Of Kingdoms heavily focus on sovereign politics, trust. Princess Lyn explores where everything started, including the romance story of the ML Kazuya and Lyn. This is guarantee read to read alongside each other.
Finally have time to read this prequel. First of all, I want to point out how distinctively different this is from the other book Queen Lyn Clash Of Kingdoms. Both use the fantasy and romance them. But Queen Lyn focuses more on the politics and conflict. There's traces of that in Princess Lyn, but mixed in with the romance focus of Lyn and Kazuya (glad to see this mysterious ML at last). The background content regarding the Kingdoms and power system is explained a lot more here too. So all the gaps are filled in. Reading them alongside each other is fun, but if you want to get the sufficient information regarding Kingdoms. I'd start here.
I found the story enjoyable. Despite some grammatical errors, I was able to read it in a single sit through. One thing I noticed is that you sometimes mix present and past tenses. Now, there were a few gripes I had. 1st, I just wish that the romance didn't go so fast and had more time to develop the character's feelings. First time meeting Lyn, Kazuya says a few words and immediately kisses her. The slap was the appropriate response. Then later that same day, she goes looking for Kazuya and kisses him. I was like "What?" Similar thing to Rhys, who also kisses her out of the blue, but this time she just goes with it. She feels naive. I kinda feel like if they both came to her saying that they want to teach her some practical things about sex, she would just agree.
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Writing: Going to give this 5 stars, while there are areas that can be approved upon. Unlike the first time I read this authors works, she has improved considerably. Plot, Character, very good. The pacing is neither too slow nor too fast. I can tell there's a solid plot and direction in where the story is going. For the characters introduced, right now the ones with most character development other than Lyn and Kazuya are Rhys. World Background, gradually being added in. Not too much that it overwhelms you. Update stability, simply amazing. Can't wait to read more.
For a story that's just started the pacing is very good. The world background is gradually being explained. Since this is part of a series, there is references and explanations here that aren't mentioned with the other book. Making up for the lack of world background there. The authors allows us readers to understand the characters thought process in more detail than most authors write about. Overall a good story, hope the author keeps up the good work.
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I truly enjoyed reading such a relaxing story with an overall wonderful flow and character design. I have yet to check out any of your earlier work but you certainly have my interest, I look forward to seeing this story develop. You are a good writer with an eye for tempo and writing rhythm which results in quality work with a very fluent storyline; well done, I applaud you. I hope you keep writing and pamper us with chapters. Have fun!
I am all stars becoz the author had give so much effort though the writing quality maybe better.bt then its so interesting story .i am appreciating your efforts to this story.
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I really like this novel 😍 👌 and i really appreciate the author for writing this novel..u rock author thnk u soo much... being a girl i really like the Main Lead Girl..nd i will surely recommend it to my frnds
I won't really recommend this book to everyone who has time to spare. You feel all the emotions from the character as you read it's an amazing book you will regret it if you don't
Wow im reading the synopsis and already fall in love. I dont know. Its sound cliche but i just love how ML and FL have different temparament. Hope the story develop well amd good luck to author!
I am really fond of princes and princesses the most...i am curious to what life do they have that normal citizens can impossibly obtain...i am expecting to have a good ride reading your jewel dearest author...wishing you the best of everything....😊😊😊😊😊
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√ Writing Quality: Keeps getting better and better. Glad to see the author improving so much in such a short amount of time, shows she's paying attention to peoples advice. √Updates: Strangely stable for someone who has three stories. √ Character Development: The authors strong point. (Queen Orthez is interesting) √World Background: Getting a lot better. Glad to see gradual explanations in the chapters. √ Story Development: Focusing more on the romance side and yet building up suspense on the actual plot. Wonder who the real enemy is for this story, is it the Sound Kingdom or is it somebody else?
Unlike the others other story Queen Lyn 'clash of kingdoms.' This story focuses heavily on the romance side than the sovereign politics and battles. Reading them alongside each other, I find the gaps of knowledge from each one being filled. The authors writing style is developing. She's improved a lot from the beginning stages of her first novel, and I wish her the best with these stories.
The first installment of the series, the prequel to Queen Lyn. I'm glad the author took on my suggestion to write this story and Queen Lyn at the same time. The areas I was confused on in Queen Lyn are cleared up after reading Princess Lyn. There's more world content here in Princess Lyn, making up for the lack of explanation in Queen Lyn. I hope the author utilizes world info in her other book, and continue developing the characters well for this one. Overall, I recommend this story for anyone interested in fantasy romance.
Amazing novel. I've been following the authors works for a long time now, and her stories never disappoint. I like how the novel is not set in the past or the present timelime. It is set in the distant future and yet resembles life in the past. The characters are very unique. The FL is very likeable.
Author Review - Yes this story is part of a series This is the first book, but the second book Queen Lyn was written first. Prequel: Princess Lyn : Queen Lyn Sequel: Empress Lyn The story flow won't be disrupted even if you read Queen Lyn first due to the 'flashbacks' • Plan --> 300-600 Chapters (depends) • Starting from Chapter 35 of Queen Lyn: Clash of Kingdoms, I'll try to mirror the chapters from here. So reading them both at the same time helps. • Writing Quality: I'm not a very good writer, though my writing style has developed since Dream star beginning chapters. I still have a lot to improve on, just message me on the comments section if I make any mistakes. Or head over to the official discord channel. https://discord.gg/9Cwt9Jz