Pokemon: The Adventure!

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AiLund

Hello guys!! 👋 Author here! 🤗 I wanted to give you a heads-up before you continue or start expecting some things. √ There will be no harem, it is not present here, it is absent. √ Slow, but every chapter is there for a reason. There may be some hidden content within that you guys didn't bother reading because it is not entertaining. √ Read in moderation. I don't want you guys to get sick or anything reading this kind of thing for hours without stopping, I care for you, capiche? √ You can point out my mistakes, I actually appreciate it very much so that I could edit it out and have you read much more fluidly. √ This has some romance, dark, gore, and other things so be prepared. That's all for now, bye~

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Harry_Ludrecius

Something like a totodile or a feebas maybe a baby Lapras. …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

This is much better than your first one, that's for sure. Improvement can be seen here, or were you just lazy on writing the Caleb ff you made first? Anyways, good pokemon ff, good job with this. Keep it up and don't drop either of your work it is one of the best

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HAUNTED_FIRE_101

Hey author, fanfic is nice but one thing I don't understand as why MC is too freindly that gave royal Pokemon(Bulbasaur) like random Pokemon to his friend.

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Carlos_Campos_3965

Good story.

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AllSeeingBedroom

Good story over all but no sign of Wimpod so high chance that the Golisopod in the cover is clickbait but still hoping that it is not.................................................

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Daoist573A6n

5 STARS FOR WRITE QUALITY, 1000000 STARS FOR PROGRES! !! !! GOOD ONE MY MAN RECMEND IT FOR OTHERS FOR SUREEEEEJSJSJSJSJEHEIDJDBBDBDHDHDJDJDJJEJE

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RenierGusi

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Froukie

it kind of threw me off tbh, mareep? really dude? I don't like that pokemon at all, except for being cute it has no redeeming qualities, however your story made me happy as storm got to show it's uses, realizing that mareep isn't that good in games but in an actual world where Pokemons could move freely while tactics are in play made me really pumped for this ff

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GRVYRDHRS

A pokemom ff that is slow but has potential to become one of the best when reading, althoigh that will only be happening if it wont drop. lots of potential, gotta suggest it

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mow

Good stuff man, prefer this one way over the first, Mareep is also a cute pokemon and quite a decent electric type once it evolves into Ampharos as well.

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OmniKing99

good ff, waiting to see what would happen infture, catch legendsaries, please, like lugia, zapfos, anythng, atleast one. only, thung i hate, msreep

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DotComplex

Is this dropped? Like are you just kickstarting Toad Sage's child before updating both regularly or have you completely given up on this one author?

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ravhage

love the story so far

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Tsukuyomi777

The plot of the story is very good and the Main character is not overpowered from the start that seems nice along with the Pokemon that are chosen neither are too strong nor too weak. This story update is very stable and author replies to the queries . There is also no Harem which is a plus in my book. keep up the good work