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The plot of the story seems pretty good but the quality of the writing is really amateurish I hope that can improve which will make it a lot better
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I read your two chapters, I think they are quite interesting and have the potential to be a good story. taoi if I may comment, your writing still has some errors, I hope that in the future it can be improved again
I read the two chapters and I'm pretty sure the book is going to be interesting. The characters should be more interesting and I really like the title. 😊