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Playing PokeMMO In Another World

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作者: DevilHanu

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Imagine a Guy with barebone knowledge of Pokémon, gets transferred to a World where no one knows about Pokémon And the said World somehow gets connected to a World which is similar to Pokémon Games.

Well, This Story is all about that Guy.

Introducing Dipper, a normal teen who stumbled upon a game called PokeMMO while watching a short video.

Dipper who is neither a Pokémon expert nor had he ever played a Pokémon game other than Pokémon Fire Red was intrigued by the game and chose to give it a try.

While Dipper was immersed in the game, a powerful bolt of purple lightning struck his house's roof.

Dipper didn't had time to react as he watched lightning tore through the roof of his house and struck him.

Waking up after the strike, Dipper finds himself in a completely different world – a world almost identical to his original world. Almost, as nothing related to Pokémon exist in this World, be it Pokémon anime, Pokémon games, or even Pokémon cards.

Thinking that this was just a normal world, Dipper went outside only to witness the most unimaginable thing in the sky he could have thought of.

"Is that a bird...?"

"No, it's a plane...?"

"It's a giant Professor Oak."

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Warning - MC is a noob when it comes to Pokémon, So he will make some choices that you'll expect from someone who is new to Pokémon.
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Disclaimer - Pokémon and Characters related to Pokémon belongs to there rightful owners. I only own the Characters that I created.
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I am a new Author, and writing is something new to me.

I am writing this fan fiction to gain experience, so please don't expect anything grand from this fan fiction.

I am also a student, so updates will not be regular.

As I write, I will try to improve the quality of my work.

PS - English is not my first language. So please go easy on me.
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Shameless Review On My Very First Fan Fiction.

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_ShiningMoonLight_

Legitimately, I don't know how people enjoy reading this. Issue 1: The first problem with it is the fact that when it says PokeMMO, it means PokeMMO. All pokemon characters aren't real people and are just NPC's with soulless dialogue to progress the plot, also when I say NPC's I legit mean in canon the story shows how they just repeat the same dialogue because the story isn't based on the anime but instead the games which is a major downside given that it creates the problem of boring characters that are just one offs. Solution 1: This could have been alleviated by basing the actual world with a mix between PokeMMO and Pokemon anime. A mix of the PokeMMO system for pokemon power with levels, IV'S, and other game mechanics would create the power structure for the story and the anime world could have made the world building story so much better. Issue 2: Secondly, the stupid system tasks everyone in the pokemon world has to do are so dumb because they just make the story even more linear than it already is. Solution 2: All that really needed to happen was making it so that the Earth people were randomly dropped in the world with no directions. This would allow for unexpected Earth people to find rare items or Pokemon with them slowly figuring things out. Even then with the Mc's knowledge he would be one step ahead. Conclusion: That's the reason why I don't like the story and how I think it should be improved. (Note: A better idea for the plot of the story would have been the Pokemon anime world, not knowing why and increasing amounts of random undocumented people ← (Earth people) were constantly appearing in their world. With the Earth world not knowing why people were disappearing and reappearing with Pokemon that they befriend while in the Pokemon world. This would have allowed for the main character's knowledge to still be important but at the same time, providing challenges for him to have to overcome. With our main character having challenges such as getting his first pokemon without money, finding a way to hide from the Pokemon government given that he has no identification or fighting against earth people who decided to join team rocket.) [Double Note: Also make it so that Earth people have their souls and not physical bodies in the pokemon world so that when they die, it damages their souls, which could have lasting consequences for dying there.]

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Husband

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Hayai_Kami

Its a fantastic Pokémon fanfic. I Never read such a fantastic Pokémon on Webnovel. Its unique. I recommend to read it, its Not Like the other Pokémon fanfics that Play in a heavely AU Pokémon world. I cant wait for more chapters to come out.

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ONE_ABOVE_ALL

Haha its good one hope author dont drop it fast like others

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HarkenEliwood

I don't like the use of a level system. Even in the official mangas, it doesn't make sense to me. However, this is a VR world based on PokéMMO (you are a man of taste), so it's ok. I don't always like the choice of team for the MC but it's clear that he is not a Pokénerd that has watched Best Team videos and guides.

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KairoValentine

Cool take on a poke fan fix would love to see this continue

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WalkingTall

A fun read, and an awesome story!!! It is the perfect blend of journey and character writing!!!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🐐👍

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UnknownKneeMoose

Imagine someone who got barebones knowledge about Pokémon, got isekaid to a universe where no one knows about it and then that universe is connected to the Pokémon game in SAO VR style. The MC makes some choices that you can only understand if you're new to Pokémon. It's a fresh take on Pokémon ffs and so far so good. What I'm concerned about is the eventual final mix up of the Pokémon game world and the MC's isekaid world, not entirely sure on how that would pan out from my POV. Don't remember much if there were any glaring flaws in grammar. Author updates daily. Plot is good so far, tho there have been some red flags. World Background... it's Pokémon.

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LavaKnight300

How should I put it… the pokemons had no emotions, kind of like automated robots. No interactions with his Pokemons. It’s kind of like someone narrating their gameplay. Though the idea is good, author need to give the mons some souls, and more interactions to other people not just to the system or himself, that’s all.

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Nightmare12_XL

a pesar de que leo este libro traducido se entie nde bastante bien y es la primera ves que veo que usan el juego pokemonMMO

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Darkened007

though not too many chapters per se, this fic is probably already in my top 3 pokemon fics. hope for more chapters and for this to not be dropped

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prateek_gadagalli

nice keep it up [img=coins]

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hvsr
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just update more and this improves . m

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