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Shidou Itsuka was in love with love. But one fateful day, he ran into a girl at the center of a spacequake, wearing next to nothing and a lonely expression. Turns out girls like her are the cause of spacequakes and there's only one way to seal their power: seduce them and fuck them. Now, tasked with this outlandish mission, can Shidou master pickup artistry without betraying romance?
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AHAHAHHA Awesome, i had a blast reading this, its the H version of date a live basically, lots of lemons, i look forward to read the yuri parts, nothing beats 2 girls making out when you do them at the same time. Also, i got some water in my lungs while reading that Yoshino (she is over 40 despite being small) was completely naked except for her raincoat astral dress plus boots. that surely took me by surprise. Nice.
Why does this have the yuri tag when the MC is male, unless its genderbend 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🙂🙂🙂🙂😨😰😰😨😰😰🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢..........................
will rale this review tomorrow. its 1 am lol......will rale this review tomorrow. its 1 am lol......will rale this review tomorrow. its 1 am lol......will rale this review tomorrow. its 1 am lol......
Now this is a surprise! a 18 version of date a live, which Is one of my favorites anime and novels... And shido is NOT a whimp with girls relationships... Though this got me thinking... how was Kotori sealed if she has to DO it with shido?... Mmmm... Well, that aside, the writing quality is above average, i will not say perfect since it has some small issues here and there but aside from that its excellent... My only problem is the updates seems to be slow =P.
WOW. this is high quality!. I liked it a lot, this is like an eroge of date a live. Shidou is slowly becoming a H protagonist lol, I cant wait for the twins, since he must do them at the same time xD
Well... There are only 4 chapters (Chapters are REALLY LONG, like 10.000 word long) at the time of this review. So lets start. Writing QUality is excellent, except for few mistakes here and there. Updates?Cant say much. Story development... Its ERO!!!!!!, instead of kissing, shido must have Şêx with them hehehehe.. Character design is looking good. AS for World background?... I would little more but I think its fine. [img=update]