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In the all encompassing mountain range known to mankind as the Himalayas at a point where the pure white world of snow meets the sea of grass creating a beautiful contrast. A man is seen sitting cross legged in a meditative pose with a katana or sword of some kind resting on his knees , when a iridescent glow was seen in front of him which gradually seems to brighten up more as time goes making the man to exit his meditation.
When the man opened his eyes he found he was not in his previous spot but in a place which seemed impossible to decipher when suddenly he 'hears' a voice:
I AM THE RECORDS OF ALL EVENTS,THOUGHTS,WORDS,EMOTION AND INTENT TO HAVE EVER OCURRED IN THE PAST ,PRESENT,OR FUTURE.I AM WHAT YOU CAN SIMPLY CALL THE AKASHIC RECORD AND I AM HERE TO GIVE YOU A CHOICE OR A REWARD IF YOU SO WISH TO TAKE IT.
English is not my first language
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Though, it is just starting but it's like breath of fresh air as far as I am concerned, i haven't read this trope yet ....so keep up the good work 👍
Here is it, as per the customs a 5 star review from the author, the journey has just started and i hope you guys enjoy this as much i did while writing it.
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the story is actually impressive for a beginner but i have some questions , critiques and suggestions u said u don't like plot holes but how is the mc in the same class as rias and akeno , the mc is like 15 yrs old while rias and akeno are both 18 yrs old at the start of the series , was this a mistake or is it 3 yrs b4 canon My critique I think u should have fleshed out mc relationship with his parents better allow us to see why the mc loves them so much , so it would have hit harder when they died or as story progresses giving us flashbacks of the mc past so we can understand the mc pain better also u the fanfic pace is a little to fast u should add a little bit more dialogue btw characters and the fights are two short , the choreography isn't bad but the fight should be longer and should have a more satisfying end , try watching naruto or jjk for inspiration , also will the mc become more emotional now that he has an uchiha bloodline . Suggestions i feel u should give out more time for the mc train his abilities , also try to find away for the mc to combine abilities that he gets for example combine thunder breathing + renewal of takwendo to create a brand of high speed combat style , also can u try and flesh out the mc character more
I'm sorry, but this is not my cup of tea. I have read up to chapter 5 and I will say that everything seems to be fine, but there is a feeling of shrinking.