/ Book&Literature / Percy Jackson: Son Of Artemis(Complete)
概要
"I don't want much... Just my mother... or... at least know who she is... if she cares... can I find that at Camp Half-Blood?... then sign me up..."
I own nothing but my OC's and plotlines...
Also, Mc Doesn't know that he's Artemis's son for a long time
The cover isn't mine, Hope you enjoy it!
Read on Patréon!
Patr0n.com/GodSage
タグ
-- 推薦
ランキング 
-- 推薦
チケット あなたも好きかも
33レビュー
4.05
- テキストの品質
- アップデートの安定性
- ストーリー展開
- キャラクターデザイン
- 世界の背景
あなたの考えを他の人と共有してください
レビューを書く
Artemis cannot have children for she is one that cannot be touched so it would frankly be impossible for her to carry a child just so u know its in greek mythology
This has the potential to because one of the greatest fanfics I have found so far in this website, it has an interesting origin that explaining how the events lead up to the story and a protagonist that has a relatable goal of being accepted by a certain someone just like all of us whom once wanted to be accepted by a certain someone, overall keep up the good work Author sama.
-around 1230 letters worth of 'eh' level criticism ahead- skip to the bottom for a one sentence summary of what I'm ranting about. [warning, I have pretty high standards] Good idea but none of the characters act like real people, mc accepts things way too easy (not skeptical enough) random guy rocks up and tells him that he teaches special children and invites mc to his school, what does mc do? he blindly trusts said guy and let's guy bring him alone, into a forest. would any person who isn't brain dead would suspect something. the characters act so inconsistent, one second the mc is an abused child, but now he's some social butterfly. all of the immediate and long term consequences are ignored, this takes away the weight of actions that have been committed, like someone being punched in the face but there is and will be no bruise or concussion, just straight back into the fight. this story lacks reason, like it was put out just because, the story may be thought out, but the personality of the characters is fluid and changes to whatever is convenient for the story. DON'T DROP THE STORY just because I don't like this, I've seen too many authors drop their work just because 5 out of 100 people don't like it use any criticism given to improve. just because this isn't for me doesn't mean it isn't for someone else. this story lacks realism (how people act and behave etc...) otherwise, 'pretty OK' on the scale of 'I can't read this without poking my eyes out' to 'I can't look at. anything other than this book rn' readable, but definitely not professional grade, has room to improve
5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag 5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag5 star without reading just for No-Harem Tag
i dont know how to feel about this novel after he goes off the deep end (after the talk with art) but up until that point for me it was great and i just dont really understand why it has gotten to the point it has where he makes an oath on the styx to kill all gods..... imo it feels forced and lets not even talk about the robotic like responses from art either even though ealier its made out that she wants to be close to him but not able to even says early on when he first used a bow she wanted to claim him.....??? .... at ch 66 its not bad but due to weird inconsistencies makes it just weird to read and the plot feels forced especially with his mother and him as well as the killing all gods. author more or less made it into a wierd abandonment novel
ネタバレを明かす
One of the best fics this year I love and I hate but its beautiful. The only real problem I had was pacing. <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
AWESOME!!! Dont even think and just read it. Author if you drOp i will visIt where you live and force you to Write more. MUAHAHA—-($(&:&:(!:$:!(!;!:;!;!;!:&:&;&;’;&&;’;&;&(&;&;&;&’;’:’;&;&;$$(&;&;&(&&;&;&;&(&(&&(&($;&;&&(&($(&&(&(&(&(&&(&(&(&(&(&&;&;&;&;&;&&;&;&;&;&&(&;&;&;&;&
amazing novel so far I hope you just add little confidence in the mc personlity in the futur
If you are what you eat then if I eat chocolate why don’t I taste like it? Novel is beautiful and emotional, even though starting out, it’s really good and full of good vibes
Started off great but started losing me later in the work. Just tried to tie to many things In the story and it eventually just lost meaning to me. I may pick it back up later but as it is from the latest I read was just a convoluted mess of too many things.
I liked it, it has a good plot and how the characters developed, or dear author, I would like to know if you are still taking more chapters or have it abandoned so as not to get excited
BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MOREBEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MOREBEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MOREBEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MOREBEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE BEST BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE
Much better than any other fábrica about Percy Jackson.Much better than any other fábrica about Percy Jackson.Much better than any other fábrica about Percy Jackson.
expppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
Perfect. But need more romance.Perfect. But need more romance.Perfect. But need more romance.Perfect. But need more romance.Perfect. But need more romance.
It’s about time you beta simp cuck retard. Anyways like the beginning.👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽
are you high? are u into naive mc? into someone m? do you like mc who have inferiority complex ? or are you into mc that have some problems in his i.q then this ff is the one for you. the plots is all and good, not great but something avg. Ive seen worse plots so this could be passable.
So far it had great potential with how it's interesting and different but the uncertainty of if it being dropped doesn't give some readers reason to read it if they think it won't even be finished or end with a positive note.
This is probably one of the most entertaining reads I'd had in a while now since almost all novels right now are trash But this novels has a has some problems First, it feels way to rushed like dude Second, the update speed is pretty slow but overall I'd say its above average
Once upon a time, there lived a gorilla. He loved his mummy. But then, humans came and put him in cages. He was sad. Very sad. Then, a kind lady rescued him and put him in a bigger cage. People come and watch him every day, some throw food too. But he is still sad. But, someone threw a phone one day, since then, Gorilla is addicted to fics.