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Wish Fulfilment | Gamer | GodLike MC | CYOA | Yuri | Overpowered | Absolute Immortal | Female Reader | RWBY | BNHA | Harry Potter | Fate | DBS | Avengers | DC | DxD | Worm | Akame Ga Kill | HxH | OnePiece | Marvel | Shokugeki no Soma | Toriko | Fast Paced | Polyamorous Yuri Relationship | AU
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I can only say that not having a name is a negative point to the story, among others, the time jump is too fast, the use of "pov" is not used well, but it is interesting with all its problems that the story has xD.
People don't talk like that. People don't just say what they think. People cannot just start chatting like they are old friends. Your characters are not alive.
this is pretty good even though it's practically a copy of a story from wattpad "op gamer journey through the multiverse" like same wishes same plot everything.
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Other readers already point out all problems in this fanfic so I also want to say this story even doesn't have a synopsis I'm a bit upset. It's kinda ruined the story when protagonist/character don't have a name. I haven't read this fanfic yet cause I want to see reviews.
Its ok for the moSt part but id really Just make a name For the character as the Y/N thing is really annoying to deal with other than that nothing really bothers me