/ Anime & Comics / Oshi No Ko: The Millionaire Boxer
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A fan of Oshi No Ko died and was reborn at 13 years of age with the looks and ability’s of James Lee from Lookism and the wealth and influence of Kambe Daisuke from The Millionaire Detective
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There's nothing romantic between him and Ai yet and Ai was ra*ed so it's a terrible story[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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its on chapter 4. thought mc will face slap the mafia like some Chiness mc. but he didn't. quite disappointed about it. hope author post more chapter.
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