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over powered MC is in naruto world , with the strength of one punch man. he kicks ass with a single punch...
Hey where are you going you only killed half of the enemy ninjas
"sorry being Shinobi is just a hobby, i took upon ...... lost interest ..bye bye "
Hey wait ..wait... Swish..
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This is just a fan fictions and many of the characters are borrowed, they belong to the original creators........
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[ Akemi took out a kunai and stabbed it right at the silhouette's heart, the silhouette didn't even flinch and kept on making his move as if the person who got stabbed was someone else. A strike landed on Akemi's throat, breaking his voice box, then the same hand entered his body like a hot knife passing through the butter. The hand came back with the same swiftness as it entered, but it was holding something. Akemi heard a murmur in his ear, " you should have never mentioned my book..." ] Thumbs up
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Hmm, lets see MC's character development is good, quite shaky story at first but now(ch26) the story is stable MC has cheat but controlled and has lots of potential left to explore m sure Authors skill will improve overtime since MC's development can take many routes, i think the timeline is also good since there is a lot of fighting at that period and more opportunity to grow, what I m disappointed is how system is flung around by mc. Cons: *Slow release rate
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There are a few problems with this story. Spelling/grammar/sentence-structures, the fast pacing and the psychotic MC who asks his system to kill it self. The author fails to connect the reader with the characters emotionally and I personally don't feel bad for the MC. He deserves to live miserably due to being an ass. If you want an okay OP story you can give this a read, but there is better ones you can sink time into.
REALLY GOOD BOOK !! A LITTLE SAD AND DEPRESSING BUT INTRIGUING!! PLZ MASS RELEASE ALSO U NEED TO MAKE MC A HAREM !! Plz KILL ORICHIMA AS A CHILD !! IF THIS NOVEL ISNT A HAREM NOVEL ILL CRY ! 😂😂👍
I really good hope it continues in future ... and see how dar the MC go's to be a one punch ninja😂😂😅 And hopefully get to see Alpha back in story later on
Although the fanfic title feels misleading at the start of the story, it does get to the OPM system once he starts taking getting stronger seriously. Also I saw someone commenting about it being dark, but get real, this is naruto world, there are wars, murder, etc. The writing and story development is very well done imo, if there was something I would complain about it would be that there is a certain event that spanned over several chapters, I feel that event could have been shortened to a couple chapters, mostly because it felt a bit dragged out (exciting non the less). The update stability is quite good, as far as I have seen. I would recommend this to people who like strong protagonists, who are very annalytical. 7/10
There are a few problems with this story. Spelling/grammar/sentence-structures, the fast pacing and the psychotic MC who asks his system to kill it self. The author fails to connect the reader with the characters emotionally and I personally don't feel bad for the MC. He deserves to live miserably due to being an ass. If you want an okay OP story you can give this a read, but there is better ones you can sink time into.
Got click baited in reading this novel, can't ya do something about that- That night xxx were attacking, system says MC to grow from 8 month old baby into 3 year old boy and alert his parents who are sleeping beside him, I really would have freaked out if the dad was me.
Good read for Naruto x one piece fan however there are very few chapters . Author bro can you step up your game ? <3 P.S I don't like 140 character requirement for review post
Really good so far. I am excited to read more.Really good so far. I am excited to read more.Really good so far. I am excited to read more.Really good so far. I am excited to read more.
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Why does this review need to be more than 140 characters??? Ugh. It's a good read. That's all you need to know.......................done
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My anticipation is rising, I am looking forward to more don't dropMy anticipation is rising, I am looking forward to more don't dropMy anticipation is rising, I am looking forward to more don't drop
I love it, can't wait for more. You are very talented with writing, I will be checking your other book. I hope it's even better than this one.
This a good fan fic of Naruto and one punch man. The rate of release is bad. I think the author has stopped writing this novel.,🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
I stopped reading as soon as the writer started with the dialogues. These dialogue format just makes the writer seem really lazy. What is with these newer fictions always being written in this terrible style and format