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Avarik Halcen, an Armament Haki prodigy, is kicked out of the Whitebeard Pirates. So with the help of his first mate, Axcel D. Grey, Halcen becomes a Devil Fruit Hunter. He's got big plans in store. But in order to get what he wants, they'll have to go up against the most powerful forces in the world. Can they survive? Dark AU
Hey guys, this is my first attempt at publishing a fanfic. I've got lots of ideas, this is just the first I had ready to post. I'm also working on actual books, and about a dozen other projects, so writing is my passion. Hopefully that shows.
I love One Piece, but I don't own it, so I take no credit for Eiichiro Oda's characters, nor the One Piece world. But I did put a lot of OC's in here. So enjoy
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After catching up to chapter 81, here are my reviews. I honestly don't recommend it to any die hard OP fan. Reasons might not be what you think. First of all the writing Quality ain't bad. In fact it's one of the major point gaining factor in this novel. The English is quite decent and there are hardly any mistakes. Story development and character design are bad. it's downright bad. Don't be fooled by the prologue. Actually ignore it altogether. None of the info you gain from the prologue is consistent. The MC is weak. Pathetically so. His Armament prodigy status? That's a joke. I refuse to believe it to be armament haki. it simply isn't. Even using black paint on body might provide more defence than his Armament. His knowledge from being a Whitebeard pirate so long is none. Romance dawn Luffy knows more about piracy than this guy. And that's saying something. He's a whiny kid, with a narcissistic superiority complex that expects the world to be his for the bidding and everything to just fall on his lap. His wisdom is what you'd expect from a prepubescent child. And let's not talk about growth. It's regressing. So, overall not a captain material at all if you disregard the talk no jutsu. I mean he has the heart in the right place but he's dumb. So what can he do with it. while I'd not have minded a dumb af MC but the author has to put the Whitebeard pirate for years troupe here and it made the whole thing inconsistent for me. The only silver lining this fic has is the good grammar and writing style, decent English and updating Stability. Other than that the story development is just bamboozling in a bad way.