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WARNING: IF YOU HAVE A WEAK HEART, THEN YOU SHOULD SKIP CHAPTER 21-30 OF THIS FANFICTION
And I really mean it. Because these chapters could make you feel like the story is completely thrash if you are not used to reading truly disturbing content. the true masterpiece starts after chapter 30.
Synopsis:
//Sea calender, year 1383,
//117 years before the beginning of the great pirate era and 64 years before the birth of Gol D Roger.
A soul got reborn in east blue as Monkey D Maki.
But Maki was no ordinary person. Along with her knowledge of the previous life, she has also a system. A sigma system.
But then why she is a girl ?
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I got this idea recently and wanted to try it out. Don't worry it is a planned out story. And this is going to be slow paced. Hope you like it.
The main character will not engage in consensual sexual activities, but R-18 because I will mention the true cruelty of the celestial dragons. I hope I don't have to write it for you to understand.
And this story will be a gender bender. So you are warned.
I have already started God valley incident Arc in my p@treon AnimefanfictionInd.
It will be available for the members of the tier fanfiction phase 1
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レビューを書くI have never seen a main character with such a strong will. Yes, the idea is strange, but there is something about him that grabs your attention. I can confidently say that this is a very good fanfiction that is underrated.
Why don't you leave the MC as a man since he's gay? There's no need to genderbend him in the story. It's weird as hell, I'm not going to lie
Shameless review or more like a request to readers, from the author. My only request is to be patient while reading it. Atleast wait till the first Saga is over. English is not my primary language so please forgive me for my mistake with your big heart. Some of you might not like the second Arc, "True Hell". So if you don't like it, then please skip it. I know, that there are not much system elements in it. But I hope that you like the story.
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Very good so far. Only complaint I have is the grammar, maybe when author is finished they can rewrite it so the grammar is better. But other than that it really surprised me, the story is genuinely good enough for me to overlook the grammar and the cringe worthy name, but it does make up for it. Not everyone will be okay with this story since after chapter 20 it gets into heavy stuff, but the author does put up warning at the start of every chapter and in synopsis. So be warned cuz it will be a dark story and will not shy away from torture and the like. Let’s hope author does not drop this and keeps cooking.
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The writing is simply amazing. The plot is pretty dark so if you are a hearted guy then this fanfic isn't for you.
the story has a good start and I think the fanfic is well written. I just hope this story won't be dropped in the future because it has good potential (sorry for the mistakes, I'm writing with Google translate)
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absolutely beautiful story writing i can feel the writing coming inside of me with how peak it is!absolutely beautiful story writing i can feel the writing coming inside of me with how peak it is!absolutely beautiful story writing i can feel the writing coming inside of me with how peak it is!
well the mc called Monkey D Mari train from the age of 4 and learn most of the martial arts and haki of the world before 12 them she go to and get sleved and is raped and tortured mentally and fisically ( SHE IS 12 BY THE WAY') , forced to eat humans , after she escape she became a canibal who have a body full of scars from her training when young and the torture from the Celestias Now about the grammar its bad not the bad of my god i cant read but sometimes you will need to read again the palagraph to understand what they are saying but its a ok to me who readed MTL Stability is not really good because author is writing 7 stories at same time but until now its a ok to me and i love the fanfic of sakura ( Ino is the useless one , Sakura at least gave birth to Sarada ) The world Background is Solid like a brick and good and its not bad HAVE A GOOD ONE AUTHOR 7/10
ネタバレを明かすI wanted to make the MC a man. But you know just forced cannibalism wasn't enough for me. I wanted to write something really sick and twisted. So sick that it would be hard even for myself to write. And since I was not planning to write any romance related stuff, I thought why not make MC a female. Believe me I have struggled a lot to write those chapters. But all is for the sake of revenge. So if you want to read a somewhat satisfying revenge story, then this story is for you. Because in the end, Gay or not won't matter. This is my second review.
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Female Mc = Trash... Type your review here. Please write your review as detailed as you can. Your reviews would be very important to the story (at least 140 characters).