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概要
In the wake of Gol D. Roger's execution, Dylan, a reincarnator, awakens in East Blue. For a decade, as a marine he ruthlessly purges pirates, maintaining East Blue's reputation as "the weakest sea." Yet, as the gears of fate shift, Dylan ventures into the New World, ushering in an era of unparalleled change.
NO ROMANCE
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Author name: The Evening Breeze Is Silent
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Original name:灭梦导师 海军王
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レビューを書くI don't like this fanfic first mc went to join marine and you decided to just skip time 12 years and then you made him overpowered also why the hell mc is working with to piece of shits at top also why he so much extreme
it's actually quite good, there is no big problem with the translation ,and its a lot more interesting than a regular vanila si/oc
Author , do u know human interactions? Seriously , instead of writing idiotic stories, u should first watch the whole one piece again and see how people make friends or how they interact . Your story is too forced. The decisions people take around mc makes no sense. For example - just because mc killed many pirates and kept peace in the east blue sea, doesn't mean that aokiji will ask him to be his subordinate and grant him full freedom . He's an Admiral, someone who has to care about many things in the whole one piece world. Bruh
This wonder has no harem. It has great potential........................................................................................................
Es uno de los mejores fanfic que he leído de One Piece que me ha dejado con ganas de más 🫡🤙🏻 la gramática y traducción son decentes sabiendo que originalmente viene de un MTL, el MC se mueve por sus ideales pero para implementarlas hay que ser realistas y eso mismo es él un Realista sin imponerle sus creencias a los demás, la trama y su desarrollo estructurado es bastante sólido y fluido aprovechando al máximo los misterios y teorías que hasta el momento a dejado one piece dejando como un efecto que todo encaja como un rompecabezas 🤔👌🏻 espero más capítulos y realmente lo recomiendo 👍🏻
this story is superb, although this isn't the posters original story it saved me countless hours of surfing the web for this kind of amazing story, thanks
This fanfic is really good but sadly it's bit outdated with some information is not present. Wish the author could rewrite and edit it with updated information
I write this not to say everything is awful. I think the author had something he/she wanted to write. Story wise however, I find it all over the place. Firstly it's teaser is misleading. Then we are introduced to a 9 yo mc followed by an immediate 12 year skip. Almost right after that we are told he has one of the 12 supreme blades. Then he has realized conquerors haki out of nowhere. And right after that it skips over to all of a sudden he got the rumble rumble fruit. There's no journey, no substance. We are told "then this happened" instead of shown. But most of all, if we are to care about a character, we as readers need a journey to read. Development of a character. There's none of that here. My apologies to the author, my intentions are to critique this story, not speak ill of you.
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mc is a very realistic marine who hates pirates, good reasoning till now. Keep it up author.