Omniversal Gamer

LV 4

Anshuman_Nirwan_0743

Bro I think you dont want any more load then you already had I think you should start focusing on completing the fanficsand your all of are amazing

LV 12

Mamdouh_mohamed

My friend, please do not increase the number of novels that you have. You already have about half of your novels suspended. If you are going to increase the novels you write, you will increase the novels that you will stop. At least finish a novel and then start a new one,I say this because your novels are amazingly good and interesting so I don't want you to stop them,I read the chapter and the chapter is great as usual from you please

LV 14

Reader_Who_Reads

Bro, how many fanfics do you make? 😂 Also stick to one or two fics for now. So many fanfics with potential! Just left in the dust by newer fics, and again and the cycle continues.

LV 4

YourDad_

5 Stars. It's Arokey after all. Just don't burn yourself.

LV 1

DaoistElxnbZ

you can make him have the anodite powers so he can level them up he can awaken the powers when he reaches a certain level like level 10

then why not give him anodite powers after he reaches a certain level his strength will improve much faster and he will have very strong powers he can even gain a boost when he is learning magic

LV 4

Scarface3699

honestly writing quality is consistent across ur works but this one just feels so slow paced and boring in comparison in just about every aspect. I don't think fixing the pace issue would even necessarily remedy the problem I think conceptually you've started out bad you've put the main character in this unbalanced sandbox with ultimately no central antagonist force or issue that looms to work toward. I think giving ur main character a more unique (not necessarily op) but just strong enough powerset that there'd be reason to want to follow the MC on this freeform roadtrip. Changing the MC personality to be more fun or thrillseeking or just a step up from the pretty much nothing we get here would also help. So in summary I think this is pretty meh to badPS. I hope to one day see u finish a story coz I do think you're a good writer👍

LV 13

Kiyan_Tribe

I like this. Finally a good Ben 10 fic. I am bit worried after seeing your other fics, I hope you continue this please.

LV 4

Jaywalker

i got to say that out of all of your fics, and thier are some good ones. This is my favorite, it has the feeling like the world is out to get him and he needs to get stronger so there's a sense of urgency that you feel as you read. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 1

GodOfLight

My favorite story at the moment, as well as several other works from this author as a young judge and the world of naruto like, I definitely put 5 stars

LV 14

Austin_Hindman

It’ s a great story and it is updated often

LV 5

Lordmoonlight

bruh I've seen who to blame in the young justice fic but I need to know can we finally have a gwen FML

LV 4

RealJoke_Pota

Okay this is like I think the second or third story by this author I've read and my god mate it's amazing keep up the awesome work.

LV 2

Louafi_Bilal

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 4

Kakarot1809

This is the best, please update and don't drop it...........................................................................................................

LV 2

Louafi_Bilal

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]