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概要
Hao Ren was born in another world and has lived for over twenty-two years being nothing but a definition of the word, average. After a high school reunion, the young man sat down on the beach shore, and mumbled to the sky, "God of Novels, you are unfair. I spent forty years of my life doing nothing but reading books and stories written by others. I worked hard to manifest this rebirth, and yet you did not bless me with anything. Why?"
A voice echoed in his mind, "Host, you have the Omnipotent Husband System."
Hao Ren scoffed and scolded the system, "What is the use of having you when you are not even active? Are you shitting with me, you bastard?!"
The system replied, "Host the condition for activating the system is to get married."
Hao Ren could not handle it anymore and cried out loud as he complained about this condition. He was not good-looking, and neither was he wealthy, who was going to marry him?
Tired, he spent the on the beach. When he was returning home, he passed by the marriage registering center. He sighed for his fate but suddenly, a beautiful lady asked him, "Hey, do you have any identity card on you?"
Hao Ren nodded in a daze, and the lady dragged him inside the office. The young man was yet to register what happened to him when an automated voice sounded, "Host, congratulations on getting married. Omnipotent Husband System is now activated."
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Years later, Hao Ren became an entity many people wished to meet. However, Hao Ren never stayed outside, to everything he had one reply, "I have to go home and cook for my wife."
Would you like to know his journey from an average to an over-achieving person standing at the apex of power and prestige?
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Author's Note: If you guys wish to discuss the book with your co-readers, or have suggestions for me on how to improve the story, you can reach me out on discord.
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レビューを書くIt started with what I thought was just a generic, clichéd Chinese-style story, but despite having a lot of Chinese influences, the development of the story is very good. Mc is already maturing and going from being just a poor guy who is told what to do by his wife, to becoming an imposing and decisive man. The only thing that confuses me is the mix of Western and Eastern names. The MC and his wife have Chinese names, they live in China, but most of the other characters have Western names, which is a bit strange to me.
Very interesting book but man is the grammar awful. To the author: You should take a bit of time to reread your sentences or run it through some sort of programm. I know there are free ones on the internet.
There is purity in these novel which you will not find in others works. It's like cool breeze in hot summer days. And up until now the development was fantastic and this story has got me hooked for sure. Please my dear author give me more chapters. Cause I am hungry for such cute love stories.
I read this after reading Nunuxd review. And he was right about it. It is actually quite good, if you can leave the grammatical and spelling mistake. Good work author keep it up. 😀
Amazing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mind Blowing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Marvelous !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love It !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The story started nicely, and had a decent relationship progression and insight into the characters. But by around chapter 30, things get out of control. The mc goes from a normal person who happens to be a transmigrator to a ruthless killer who will do anything to protect his wife, all within a few weeks of meeting her. That's my main issue. The rate at which the story progresses is way to fast, and unexplainable masterclass skills keep getting rewarded with no explanation for the people around him. How is the mc supposed to explain his sudden genius intellect and mastery of skills like assasination, racing, cooking, medicine, etc. Along with an absolutely broken AI that acts as plot armor, he creates so many unexplained situations that are brushed off as nothing serious. And the wife starts falling for him after 2 weeks of knowing him, leaving no real room for relationship growth. Also the author made it so the mc is now the only one the wife can trust by making her best friend an enemy literally out of nowhere. Basically it started good but soon became ridiculous and riddled with tropes.
ネタバレを明かす'It has same plot but different execution' is what I think about you novel, really refreshing but after he got physical like talent it kind boring because I feel like I know what he will do now. It's good novel, try it guys
A five star review for good plots and story also there is not some baseless face slap scenes, like it a lot keep up the good work
This book will get regularly updated. There will be one chapter daily, but if we meet the power stones goal, then for every 500 stones, there will be an extra bonus chapter, this chapter will be at least 2 thousand words. Looking forward to your support.