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Of Heartbreaking Beginnings and Silly Endings オリジナル

Of Heartbreaking Beginnings and Silly Endings

Music & Bands 9 章 49.4K ビュー
作者: ShoktMeNoSleep

4.5 (25 レビュー結果)

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It was said that things ripen by time were the sweetest when obtain.

Success after hard work.

Victory after tough training.

Wine after aged by years.

And love after unrequited\One sided admiring.

Thing's are always the best after it passes time, for it have endured many thing's to reach the state that it is today...


Come read as the boys, J-hope, Jimin, Jin, Suga, Jungkook, V and RM find/encounter the one truly meant for them as they strive towards the successfulness and peak of their careers while balancing the needs of their hearts....


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MakelzNiyaTo

Im somebody close to the author in real and i never knew she wrote a book untile she asked me to vote for her on a Competition here. For someone who knows her irl, it surprises me that she can actually write knowing that the author is a big goof ball, lazy and a pervert but she's nice. I skimmed the book so my review might not be accurate. When i first read the book it felt like it was so long for a single situation, as i continue to skim the other chapters i felt that there is a big improvement, sure its still need to be work on but its equally important to improve as you progress. Keep improving and know that we got your back! p.s stop.pinching our friends nipples and touching their boob have mercy on them

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Adantie

A friend of mine(author) told (beg) me to try this, so as a good friend here i am to give this book a try. Its actually to little for my taste, its not bad but its also not good. Their is still room for improvement. Happy now? I really gave an honest review so stop begging me already 😂

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Takafumii

Good story i suggest making the words more clearly and nothing wrong with the words but the punctuation should be in a good place ✌ By the way i love it keep making more of these please?

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Barrisoes

Im giving 5 stars to encourage the author to write more. The writing is still shaky and i can see that their are lots of parts that needs improvement, like usage of words, grammar, story building and other things. Still i find the story enjoyable so i would like if you can keep it up!

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Immovable087

i love it! ^_^ i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^i love it! ^_^

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Chryiss

Here to spread the positivity! ^w^ Anna and J-Hope pairing is so sweet. They are the silly dense couple who are adorable together! I feel like Anna really would be a great match for J-Hope if this was real life. I'm glad that Hobi was able to find love and a nice girl hehe. A sweet, charming little love story for Army~ Good job Shokt! :3

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ShookieSmith

short stories of each member i think. jhope one was very sweet altho it felt too short for my liking but author did well in his character and anna was cute. hope you update faster tho only eight chapters

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ralphierce

Good story, but the grammar and placing of punctuation marks need improvement. I actually enjoyed the story for the most part. Now all you need is to update it regularly and keep us hooked.

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Giving support to our former manager. The english is okay. I like that its also about idols it brings me back when we tried to get our applicants to be a real idol. The story is a bit lacking but its okay for casual read.

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khukaiMonster

I'm not a fan of bts but I support the author. Write more, do more, live more. (I can't remember the commercial that uses that tagline *shrugs*)

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AtsukiJoou

To Author, If you are going to post..please post arc wise...or I'll spam this place with "mass releases"(innocent smile) Really interesting... I felt it was a bit fast paced but still liked it... Reading these stories with 'females' in there I'm thankful that these are fantasies/fiction or else I might be drawing blood somewhere(JK, innocent smile) **. Just saying but it'll be better if you get an editor...it'll pull more readers as many here like good grammar and stuff(I'm suffering because of that too lol) Recommended!!

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Teddy_Diaz

Wow..it damn good😚😚😐☺☺☺ ...d writing skill...m d story is fabulous....love it....would lyk to continue reading more chapters😊😊😊😊😊...n love to see more novel lyk this.....😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩

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Valancy_Stirling

So far really intriguing! Really love the story, kinda has me hooked xDD thank you for writing such a good story and I definitely recommend it! 😊👌👌👍👍👍

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Daoist342753

Good story. Nice plot. Love the characters. Keep up the good work. And keep making new stories. Awesome job. Excited to more of your works. Fighting!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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