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this is going to be a bad novel, also my english is bad
this novel is an extreme au
so there is gonna be many things that got changed or never exixt at all on the oroginal novel
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It decent and have alot of potential to be a good fanfic. But for you who search a beautiful arrange dialog, interaction, and description this not for you. For the author is really a beginner for writing. As for author, you are might want to learn atleast to arange your dialog and description for better reading experience. Because for now, it will really confuse the reader, is the character is currently in thought, speaking, or you explain what the MC do or what around the MC is