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章 24: A Broken Man's Revenge 2

'Come on Ryu, think! There has to be something, anything to get us out this situation!'I thought, brain running who knows how fast. Bringing out my thoughts though, I hear whimpering, looking, I saw Hinata, trying her best to pull Danzo's arm away, to no avail, while a small stream of blood came from her neck.

"Come on Ryu, what are you going to do? Time is running out.~"Danzo said with a sing song voice, making me grit my teeth harder, and my nails dig and cut into my palms from how hard I squeezed it from frustration, before I had an epiphany.

'Wait, wait, wait, wait. I can't do anything, that much is obvious, but what can Hinata do? In her training, there's gentle fist, but Danzo would slit her throat before she gets to touch him. She was also trained to be a medic-nin, is there something they can do?... Wait, there's a Jutsu created for surgery, Chakra Scalpel! But, I don't know if it'll be able to cut through metal, Hinata, please, once remember where the arm tendons are.'I thought to myself, this may be a gamble, but right now it's the only option.

"Hinata, do you remember our training?"All I got was a whimper in agreement, I'm swear, I'm gonna kill this psychotic fucking dick head once I get the chance.

"What happened? Gave up already?"Danzo said with clear disappointment in his voice, he's really gonna die.

"Hinata, remember learning Medic-nin Jutsu, remember how little Jutsu you thought there was for only healing, and you wanted to find out how they would defend themselves to."I continued, ignoring Danzo. Taking a second to realize what I'm talking about, her eyes widen in surprise at what I'm trying to say.

"Well this is no fun, you want me to kill her slowly? Fine, I'll grant your wish."He then wraps his whole arm around her neck, and starts to choke her out.

"WAIT! Wait, wait."I said, and he loosens his grip allowing her to breath, but still wrapped around her neck.

"Look, I--"

"Ryu! Hinata, was, kid.napped."A voice from the window said slowly seeing the situation, recognizing the voice, I see Dad at the window.

"Hello Guy, how nice of you to join us. Now why don't you stand right by your son unless you want her to die."Danzo said while taking his left arm off her neck and pointing it at Guy but his other still seemed to keep her in place. Hinata though, realizing this could be her chance, flared her Chakra in her hands and slashed at his bicep, disabling his arm, but in retaliation he stabbed her in the side with his other arm, screaming in pain, seeing her fall, everything felt, slow.

"Hahaha! Look! She chose for you Ryu! Now watch her die!"Danzo said while laughing hysterically, but I paid him no mind, my brain, my heart, refusing to accept the image of her dying slowly. My brain, in an effort to trick itself, started to overlap her dying self, with images of her sleeping peacefully, us lying together in the oasis, in peace, happy...

"Ryu! Snap out of it!"I hear Dad suddenly yell at me. Grabbing me, forced to face him, he talks.

"Ryu! Look around you! Look at Danzo! Hinata!"

"Hinata? But Dad, she's fine, look, she's just.sleep.ing..."Turning to Hinata, I saw her lying in a small puddle of blood, but looking at her face, she was smiling, albeit weakly.

"It's. Ok, Ryu. I believe you can, can...*cough**cough*"

"Hahaha! Ryu! You were to weak! You will always be too weak! That's why you will die now too!"Hearing Danzo mock me, seeing Hinata dying right now in front of me, something in me, snapped. I feel, overwhelming anger, fill every fiber of my being, but I felt strength fill me to, but then, I appeared in the sky, standing on a puddle of water, and in front of me was someone I recognized, Avatar Korra. Pulling my attention though, I hear an explosion below and see Danzo flying through one of the walls of the house, and my body follow but floating on a tornado of air with Hinata in my arms.

"Why did you bring me here?"I asked Korra, turning to her.

"Because you can't be consumed by your hatred, you can easily heal her, and yet blinded by your rage you forgot of, what did you call it? Chakra water, that's it, you always carry it with you, but anyways, if you continue down this path, you could easily destroy everything around you. Nothing ever good comes of revenge, it'll only leave rubble of what used to be behind you, but you would never notice until you complete your goal and look back, but by then it would all be too late."Korra said to me.

"Don't you think that's kind of redundant seeing as I'm about to kill the focus of my anger?"I questioned her.

"Even though it's not our way you're obviously different seeing as you can tap into our past lives even though they were supposed to disappear after my fight with Vaatu, but that's not the important part cause who can I trust than practically myself? Also, while you exact your revenge, your friend is getting kidnapped."She said, and pointing to a certain direction I see Zetsu sneaking out the house with Naruto on his back.

"Now when you go back to your body, control your rage, heal your girlfriend and save your friend, you'll be able to somewhat control the Avatar state, but you have to decide what you do with your power."Korra said, before I appeared in my body again. I see Danzo in front of me, throwing wind enhanced Shuriken at me, but I kick it away with air bending.

Letting myself on the ground, I lay Hinata on the ground before I pull the water from the pond behind the house and sending it like a tidal wave to Danzo freezing him in it. Flying to him through air bending, I release him from his ice prison and use blood bending to keep him still before I put my thumb on his forehead and use energy bending to kill him.

'I wish I could've tortured you, but I have more important things to do.'I thought feeling his death was anticlimactic. Going to Hinata I start to use my Chakra water and started healing her quickly, making sure she should be fine I go to Dad.

"Dad, I've healed her but take her to Tsunade just in case, I still have things to handle."I said after deactivating my Avatar state.

"Alright Ryu."He said leaving to the village hospital. Now rushing to where I saw Zetsu, I ignored what happened behind me, but if I looked back I would've seen Danzo's body disappear.

Arriving there, I see Zetsu with Naruto on his shoulder running over the village walls, creating a tornado through air bending, I catch Zetsu and Naruto in it bringing them to me while separating them. Using my Chakra water I freeze Zetsu in it hoping he won't be able to move.

"Argh, my head. Where, Ryu? What happened?"Naruto asked, but before I could respond I block a punch by Danzo, pushing him away I create distance between him and us.

'Damnit! I thought destroying his Chakra pool would kill him, I guess he had Izanagi activated before hand already, but I guess I can torture him now.'I thought to myself seeing Danzo, deactivating Avatar state I talk to Naruto.

"Naruto, guys are attacking the village and they also tried kidnapping you, stay close to me."I explained to him.

"Come on Ryu, I can defend myself, why else would I be training?"Naruto asked rhetorically.

"Whatever, but we gotta defend ourselves till people notice our fight, so try using moves that make things go boom."

"I can do boom."Naruto responded with a smirk.

"Alright."I responded with my own smirk. Opening to the fourth Gate, I activate the Avatar state as well.

"No matter what you do Ryu, I'll kill you and then everyone you love!"Danzo yelled while throwing air enhanced Kunai while running at me, didn't he notice this didn't work last time? Well, whatever let's punish him for it.

Using metal bending thanks to Korra, I moved the kunai with my body while doing a 360 and send it straight back to Danzo which he dodges by jumping in the air, but taking advantage of the distraction, Naruto appears right behind him and slams a Rasengan straight into his back causing him to be sent flying to the floor causing an explosion.

'So he can do a bang.'I thought to myself, smiling a little seeing how Naruto has progressed. His body starts to dissipate and appeared a little away, when I was about to run at him, I felt my leg gripped, looking down I saw a white arm gripping me through the ground, damn Zetsu. What surprised me though, is Obito suddenly appearing in front of me. Using earth bending I destroy all the ground around me, knocking Obito off his feet and Zetsu losing his grip.

Grabbing Naruto I retreat with him putting space between both groups. Grabbing our attention though, I see Hiruzen with Gai arrive.

"Zetsu let's go, we've over extended ourselves."Obito suddenly said, disappearing in a swirl while Zetsu disappeared into the ground.

"Wait! I thought you were supposed to help me!"Danzo suddenly yelled, but getting no response he focuses back on us.

"I'll take you all to hell with me!"He suddenly yelled and teleported in the middle of all of us.

"GET BACK!"I yelled immediately realizing what he's gonna do. Jumping back with Naruto, the rest did as well, just in time to not get trapped in his suicide technique, to think it can capture your soul as a seal... more importantly though, we got clear.

"What was that?"Hiruzen asked me.

"It was a suicide seal I saw in one of the records Danzo had."I lied.

"Hmm, but I didn't see anything like that when we went through the papers."

"I could only catch a glimpse before it burned when the Root nin started burning the papers."I said making an excuse.

"Yes, well then, seeing as the village should be safe for now, I'll go and organize our ninja."Hiruzen said before walking away. Deactivating the eight gates, I turn to my Dad.

"Take me to where Hinata is."I said firmly, nodding he puts his hand on my shoulder before body flickering us to the hospital. Arriving at the reception area, I ask for Hinata's room, after getting the room, I rush there and see Hinata sleeping peacefully making me sigh in relief, but then something else started plaguing my mind.

'Me being with her started getting her targeted, sure if I didn't exist in the future she would still be getting hurt, but we're only 11 and she got targeted by Danzo, I almost lost her! What's stopping Obito or Zetsu targeting her like they did Naruto to get to me, or anyone for that matter! I can't constantly hover over her to make sure she's ok, but what am I supposed to do?... fuck...'

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I know I was gone... again... but I'm going to say this now no matter how long it may take I'll see this story out till the end, but on other matters, I've changed some things in past chapters, nothing to change how we got to where we are now, but more things like him kinda telling he got reincarnated, at first I thought it would be fine! But looking back, my opinion has changed, so yeah things like that will be changed, but that's it from me, I'll see you next chapter, hopefully following my damn schedule, if I still even have one to be honest...


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