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Naruto: teaching disciples for ten thousand times the Reward
3.44 (15 レビュー結果)
概要
After traveling through Naruto, he became the weakest villain Mizuki.
Fortunately, the system is activated, the apprenticeship will be returned ten thousand times.
Granting apprentices ninjutsu, illusions, taijutsu, ninja tools, items, bloodline, etc. will receive a system refund of up to 10,000 times.
【Ding! 】
[You grant Naruto a bowl of miso barbecued pork ramen, triggering a thousand-fold return. 】
[Congratulations on getting a bowl of Miso Barbecued Chakra Noodles. Eat it all and your chakra limit will increase by 1 kakashi. 】
【Ding! 】
[You grant Uchiha Sasuke the treading water practice method, triggering a ten thousand times return. 】
[Congratulations on acquiring the art of stepping on the air. You can step on the air to spiral up into the sky and stay in the air for a short time. 】
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According to the tradition of Naruto, the disciples are taught to kill their masters?
It doesn't exist. In my case, the master is always better than the apprentice.
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It is like reading a hardcore mode difficulty novel where no matter how strong Mc is he always lose. Huge plot holes and bad writing. 3rd hokage wants to kill MC just bcz he thinks he is rebel ninja, i mean hokage has no proof and no grounds to so that and still he is targeting MC. MC is tbh a victim, he is just trying to survive and havent hurt anybody at all.
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Initially I liked the story, but then the translation got so bad, I had no choice but to give up. For example mc using "toilet water" to break from shisui genjutsu makes total sense... The water smelled so bad it woke him up, right? ... There are a lot similar mistranslated powers, items, names etc. The story gets worse too when mc finally defects from his village. Writing - if I could I would give a 0 Updates - 4 Story - 3 Character - nothing special 3 World background - at least background "exist", i didn't like it so 3.
I guess this must be a Chinese novel translation, given the tropes and randomly Chinese names. Still, as far as MTLs go, enough context makes it through for those familiar with Naruto to fill in the blanks. Some manual intervention may have been made or a better translator was used. As far as the storyline goes, it's okay. The main Idea is interesting and It leans towards the comedic side of things. It definitely depends on head canon interpretations of characters and their motivations and adds cultivation novel mechanics. If that will Agravate you, just go ahead and skip it. Otherwise, if you can dedicate a few extra brain cells to smooth out the weirdness, it's an ok read. It would be infinitely better if the translator also dedicated a little time a day to run Find and Replace on each chapter to fix the obvious translation issues.
Another brainrot fanfic! My favorite [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
everything has chinese names, the translation is bad, the "author" don't know hot to do his job at all
I really like this fanfic...I've been reading it for two days straight. I was like...I really ought to look out more...this is a hidden gem. Though i prefer completed works, I will wait for this one....it's worth it! Naruto's défection was seemless and the reason was fitting. I mean it wasn't forced or complicated. Just one missing peace changed the whole picture...I sincerely support your writing style and hope that you will grace us with MORE (^^)
Poor translation, likely machine-generated. The main character is frustratingly stupid, leading to equally unrealistic behavior from other characters. The plot is not interesting at all.
Está difícil 🤔 tiene muchos errores gramaticales y una mala traducción pero que se puede pedir de una novela China 🤷🏻♂️ debe haber sido un trabajo muy laborioso intentar traducirla, 😮💨 lo único interesante es ver como el MC hace grandes cambios en la historia original y desarrollando su propia aldea, a pesar de todo lo malo aún no me rindo en no dejar de leerla 😅
it's a really great fanfic usually in the fictions where the main character has the power similar to the main character of this fiction those fictions are not very fun and they don't even last a lot this one is different 🐧
the story writing is so good that even if I hate the story I still read it author: i know you hate sarutobi but please don't make mc life so difficult ,try to make it more normal , your theme is really good 👍, in Naruto world strength makes everything so if his strength increases hokage or anyone will not try to make him an enemy, the plot has many similarities to cultivation novels pls change that mentality, overall really good
It's a Chinese fanfiction novel, I think there's no more eloquent evaluation than this ، I don't even know why I read 28 chapters at once In normal circumstances I would have stopped after the first chapter, maybe it's because it doesn't have harem, maybe it's because the plot is simple, and Mc doesn't give you a lecture explaining everything it does, or maybe I'm just bored.