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What should a martial arts master be like?
Kind-hearted? No, just orderly. Energetic? Yes, but also patient, resilient, and just, so as not to lose their way in pursuit of great ambitions.
Once an ordinary guy, but still with big dreams and diligence, after his death, he finds himself in the body of a secondary character from the anime "Naruto" – Rock Lee, a boy with a heavy destiny.
No Ninjutsu and Genjutsu, only Taijutsu, only the highest level of difficulty!
Moreover, he also stumbled upon a system that is clearly not simple, literally...
The Hellish Exercise System.
Author: [DoppioPassione]
Translator: Vandalizer_z
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This story is hard for me to rate. The story is really good, is shocking how few Rock Lee fics there is out there. I have 2 problems with it however, and just one can really be fix, first, there are barely any dialog, is more narration than anything, saying that the mc talk with Naruto and they became friends is not a good enough substitute for a few lines of dialog with they bonding (This review is being posted while there is just 13 chapters, and hopefully after Lee gets a team this will not be a problem). The second thing that I don't like is the writing style of the author, this is personal taste and there isn't anything to be done about. Is hard to explain, but it's not those hush fics where the author seem to want to make the most things happen in the least amount of words, nor it is super slow, the pacing is good. I would recommend to read the first few chapters and judge if the writing is for you.
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A good story with no major error. Interesting take with rock lee as well as one piece power system. Definitely worth reading. The story is about self insert transmigration on rock lee with a system. The system had few tasks that he has to complete to obtain tresure chest containing powers or items. It's not a training system rather can be said as challanging system.
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The talking dialogues and monologues are both in double quotes so you can't tell the difference, it's also not stated whether it was a thought or not. I like how the story is going. The character design kinda revert to the OG Rock Lee which is messed up since it's an isekai'd MC. The updates so far is good, but I don't see any consistency yet. The World Background seems to be mixed w/ other anime through the system. Overall it's a 3.4.
Lee as a genin cannot do 10 push ups? He has a father ? I think you should rethink about continuing writing this with such major plotholes. Lee in canon was an orphan and he could do 1000 pushups easily and continue training after that. This is more like a civilian from normal got transmigrated to naruto world with his body.