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Naruto: Self-Evolution

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作者: SharonMeuToba

4.65 (28 レビュー結果)

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In "Naruto: Self-Evolution," we are introduced to the protagonist whose life is abruptly cut short, only to find his soul summoned to a meeting with God. Amidst a radiant environment, God offers the protagonist a chance to be reincarnated.

Determined to embark on this new adventure, the protagonist accepts God's proposal and spins a mysterious wheel of worlds. With a sealed destiny, his new journey unfolds in the world of shinobi, where extraordinary powers and thrilling challenges await.

To shape his destiny and abilities, God conjures the wheel of abilities, which will determine the special power that the protagonist will possess in his reincarnation. With each spin, the possibilities are endless, and the protagonist's fate is shaped by this divine choice.

As the protagonist begins his new life as a shinobi, he harnesses his special ability in creative and strategic ways. Confronting dangers and adversities, he becomes a force to be reckoned with, while grappling with the weight of his past memories and the responsibility to wield his powers wisely.

Throughout his journey, the protagonist encounters familiar characters and forges new alliances, forming powerful bonds while facing threats that challenge the very balance of the shinobi world. He uncovers hidden secrets, unravels ancient mysteries, and fights to protect those he holds dear.

"Naruto: Self-Evolution" is a fanfic brimming with action, emotion, and unexpected twists, as the protagonist strives to find his place in this iconic universe. With the combination of his past memories and his special ability, he plays a crucial role in the destiny of the shinobi world, leaving his mark on history and rewriting his own fate.

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Ayries_Jesea

I read the synopsis and I can tell that you used chatgpt😂Anyway here's a free 5 star for a fellow lazy man.I just hope the contents are not made by an A.I

1yr
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zero_m

Honestly the quality is shocking for a webnovel fanfic. First off you can see the author has an decent grasp on actual biological functions and puts research and thought into every action. Second the writing quality is great with little to no grammatical errors (and the author is actively fixing the few existing ones) making it easy to read and enjoy. The rest however I cannot fully touch on as there is only 12 chapters as of writing this however if you enjoy logical well thought out stories then I highly recommend you give this Fanfic a shot.

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Celestial_Kaiser

Is it just me or this fic is quite boring? Putting the grammatical mistakes aside, the plot progresion has many flaws. Like awakening of chakra? There is no awakening needed. Kakashi testing the newly enrolled students? There is no testing, they are directly taught and then tested based on the previously taught knowledge, not to mention there is no way kakashi would appear to test the newly entered childern. I think author need to go through naruto plot again before writing new chaps. For now, It may be harsh, but I'll go with 2 star. Edit: So kakashi is a student actually, I misread it. But still there are quite a few plot flaws. So, 3 star.

1yr
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Insta_username

This fic is real good with balanced edgy protagonist and slice of life or should i say shokogeki no shouma I really like what he does with food. Keep up the good work 👍👍👍

1yr
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JerryBeansMan

Only Sypnosis with ChatGPT or the rest as well?

1yr
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GodOfLight

Honestly the quality is shocking for a webnovel fanfic. First off you can see the author has an decent grasp on actual biological functions and puts research and thought into every action. Second the writing quality is great with little to no grammatical errors (and the author is actively fixing the few existing ones) making it easy to read and enjoy. The rest however I cannot fully touch on as there is only 12 chapters as of writing this however if you enjoy logical well thought out stories then I highly recommend you give this Fanfic a shot.

1yr
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DemiGod_2972

Sigh, I couldn't read. It's bad. 1. I don't understand why SI fics that show 'God' show him to be a wimp. The MC wanted the 'Skip' button while talking with the God. I can understand you wanting to make it comedic, but it just makes your MC very unrealistic. 2. Meeting with God Gift from God is just a too big of a cheat. But alright considering that it's difficult to survive in Naruto world without any cheat (only seen one fanfic pull it right so far). 3. Having your MC, who doesn't know how to use chakra (or was just taught to use it) fighting equally against Kakashi, a person who was trained by Sakumo, was just too unrealistic. To be honest, I could still read the story despite above things. But I don't understand why you began writing in PoV instead of writing properly? Ruined it entirely for me. 5. Last chapter was 23 days ago. So looks like the author lost interest as well. Not really surprised..I hope that you can plan more before beginning the next fanfic. I understand how difficult it is to write. Anyways, good luck. Though I rated it low, I do see a lot of promise in you. But don't do PoVs.

1yr
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SharonMeuToba

Im the author soo im giving to my fanfic five star, even after noticing some holes in my plot.

1yr
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Yardigan

5 star novel so far, it has a lot of potential, just one question, I see the romance tag, and I just wanna confirm that its a single love romance because I don't see the harem tag and a lot of authors do that on purpose knowing that they plan to make a harem novel.

1yr
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somberr
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I really like the story.If done right it has so much potential.

1yr
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carlwash_1

I'm very excited to see where this goes with such an interesting ability

1yr
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zahra_kianpour

Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update Please update

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Papa_Wick

basically he can get genetic immortality and with his ability he could alter his genetics to be even better then hashiramas he could also if he got some senju or uchiha dna he might be able to dig really deep into it to get otsutsuki dna

1yr
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Avolix

keep it up ! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Boob_Master15

Alright author, let's make a deal I provide you power stones, you keep making more of these amazing chapters yeah?

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Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

1yr
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behind_your_sister

Bruh you forgot to describe the appearance of mc after the Timeskip........... But overall Iiked very much............................. Don't drop it...................................

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ChaMy
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Parece ótimo, lerei. Obrigado pela história meu patrão.

1yr
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DeejaeSutherland

I don't know why but I just couldn't enjoy the novel, the grammar was okay and good at best, it's the authors knowledge on this that kinda ruined it for me and how some of the dialogue were written weirdly.

1yr
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