/ Anime & Comics / Naruto: Reincarnated as an Inuzuka(Hiatus)
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Guy reincarnates as an Inuzuka with some wishes. That's all I got for now, first time author so bare with me. I do not own naruto or any other characters other than my OC.
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The story is too fast paced and the sharing ability is trash as I must say.BTW he gave his bloodline to a random girl who he doesn't even know. Should have made a bit calculative. the writing is good but mehh
Nice original character and story progression. Please keep posting more chapter .....,......... ........................... ................................................,...........................................................................................................
TRASH!!!!!!!!!!!!! Shares his abilities, wishes for a wife and becomes a Werwolf XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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you need to add in Tsunade and put 6 pups in her LOL!!you need to add in Tsunade and put 6 pups in her LOL!!you need to add in Tsunade and put 6 pups in her LOL!!you need to add in Tsunade and put 6 pups in her LOL!!
Bad. Just bad. I don't recommend reading. .......... ....... ........... ............... ............. ......... ..... .....................
As Darkimortal and others mention in their comments, there are many inconsistent things in your novel (werewolf - ranged attack, muzuka - mohaws, naruto world - wish a nonexistent waifu) those things make me think that instead of developing their ninjutsu they will become a specialist in genjutsu: s. Leaving aside criticism, it can be seen that you are new to writing and you make the same mistakes that most especially those who make fanfiction make. They do not think about the plot and its development with the intervention of their MC before starting to write, so it is noticeable that ideas and changes of thought by the author are added that do not go with the original ideas of the characters, as you mentioned that you I pass with the bow watching FARCRY. I will not tell you to change something, that is up to you, I will just keep writing, failing, improving until it becomes a good story or you create a better one later, either different or a reboot of it.
More more more more more more more more more more more moremoremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
keep up the great work ......................................................................................................................................................................................
YYou knew there's a clan called 'Tenro Clan' that has a technique capable of becoming werewolves and an invocation of a three-headed wolf. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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ネタバレを明かす Not not cool this is a a great story PLEASE DON'T DROP !!!!!!!!!!! Not not cool this is a a great story PLEASE DON'T DROP !!!!!!!!!!! Not not cool this is a a great story PLEASE DON'T DROP !!!!!!!!!!! Not not cool this is a a great story PLEASE DON'T DROP !!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome clan building of inuzuka. AWESOMEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
...I didn't mind when you wished for a wife kinda ruined the scene but whatever. But you just came out of nowhere with that BS I want to be a ranged fighter even though all my specs were for CQC. I was so close to dropping the story at that point but then I decided to give you another chance first like 2 paragraphs in chapter 5 then I'm like 'nope'. What kind of parent would let their kid get a dumbass Mohawk? I would smack my kid upside the head if they asked for something like that they would at least need to be 16 to experiment to see what they like not no 6. Also the kids way to smart for a 1 year old you should have at least waited until he was 3-4 to let him gain control of the body and made the body before that seem like a really bright child so the MC could come in and not seem like a freak of nature. If I was his parent I would be worried about him even if it seems like a good thing that he's really smart and get him checked on by my fellow clan head Yamanaka and go see a doctor. I mean come on this is not a 2d world ( of course I know it is a 2d world but not when the MC comes from the regular world that's when they turn real and not the fakes were everything goes as you would expect from 2d characters) were everything works out and some average dude can just lie to professional Ninja.
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