アプリをダウンロード
25% Naruto: Old One Jinchuriki / Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Naruto: Old One Jinchuriki Naruto: Old One Jinchuriki original

Naruto: Old One Jinchuriki

作者: Bigbaby

© WebNovel

章 1: Chapter 1

I was just leaving the operating room. It was 3 in the morning and I was exhausted. I am a cardiothoracic surgeon and I was performing an SVR.

The hardest part was the fact that the guy was huge. There was so much slippery fat to try to get around but I was able to complete it. He should be fine and Ieft another doctor to take care of the rest as I was getting too tired to be sure I could do it perfectly.

I am one of the best in my field, but I had worked from 10 last morning to now. The man had come in at 6 and apparently had a heart attack and had a scar in his left ventricle. The heart had swelled up and we had to restore it to it's normal size and shape. The man's size didn't make the process easy.

I entered my car and drove home. I decided to live relatively close to my job luckily, so I was able to get there quickly and collapse into bed. Although I was exhausted, I couldn't sleep so I decided to read some lovecraftian novels until I did.

I stayed up to 5 until I finally fell asleep. I didn't have work scheduled so as long as nothing happened, I would be fine.

I awoke at 11 and made a quick breakfast. As I had nothing planned I decided to go to the gym. I walked in and immediately to my friend Mary drinking water on a bench.

She also worked at my hospital and we had become close over the years. "Mary, what are you doing here?" She looked up at me and smiled. "Same as you, keeping myself healthy. Like I'd ever trust you to operate on me." I laughed at that and sat down.

We talked and worked out for a few hours until I decided to get some lunch. Mary decided to come with me so we went to a nearby subway and sat in a park. It was like we were on a date, and although I liked Mary I never decided to make a move. I didn't want any complications or anything and I was content on how things were.

After a bit I went back home. It was almost 5 and I had nothing to do. A luxury I haven't had in a while. So I decided to binge watch some Naruto. I liked the world and the characters so it was my fifth time watching the series.

Obviously, I couldn't finish so I wasted no time and continued at the chunin exams. I had drifted off to sleep after a while and woke to the sound of glass shattering upstairs.

I instantly shot up and crept towards the stairs. I pulled out my pistol that was hidden under one of the stairs and went up. I was 6'3 and lean and muscular.

I hadn't trained in any fighting other than a bit of boxing when I was younger. Good thing I had my gun. The burglar was in my room sifting through my watches and putting them in a bag.

He wore all black and if not for his flashlight I wouldn't have seen him. This was on the third story of my house and it looked like he broke through my window.

I always wondered what to do in this situation so I went into the bathroom and called the cops then went to keep an eye on the man.

When he finished in my room he walked down the hall to look for other things and once he walked past the bathroom I slipped out, grabbed him, and threw him down the stairs.

He tumbled down to the second floor and before he could stand I put my knee in his back and pressed his head into the floor. "Just you wait asshole."

I waited there for a few minutes until I could hear sirens outside. I relaxed a bit and I missed the sound of footsteps behind me. Someone put me in a chokehold and pulled me off their friend. I struggled until the first guy stabbed right above my knee and yanked the blade up my thigh.

I howled in pain just as officers busted through the door. The guy put his knife at my neck and looked at the police. "Move another step and I'll cut his fucking throat!" The cops hesitated and I stopped struggling. The first guy was weak and couldn't put up much of a fight, but this second guy was strong as hell!

One of the officers thought he had hawkeye accuracy and tried to shoot the guy holding me. Of course he hit me instead and it ripped up my left lung and into my collar bone.

It was as if everything went in slow motion and I was able to feel the bullet make its way through my body. It was painful. The guy with the knife jumped back and the one holding me dropped me on the carpet. They tried to rush me to the hospital but I died on the way.

I was standing on a white, circular platform. It was around 50 meters in diameter and right in the center were a trio on golden thrones. They all wore white togas and had ivory staffs at their sides. They each had on featureless white masks and they were turned in my direction.

"We are the children of Death and we will judge you to determine your fate." They all said in usion. I had never believed in any kind of god but being around people and trying to save lives made me wonder what would happen if they died, what would I put them through.

The one on the left throne stood and raised their staff in front of them. "In your lifetime you saved many lives and lived honestly and was hard working."

It had a feminin and sweet voice, like a mother telling her kids how much she loved them. "You cared for your poor mother the moment you could and cared for all her needs till the day she died. From poor beginnings to the path of greatness." The one on the right stood as the first woman sat down.

He had a gruff and harsh voice, it was condescending and made me want to hate him. "You've cheated on exams and pulled some out of line pranks."

Well okay, that was completely normal. The center one stood. It said nothing but held up a golden scale. The scale tilted towards the woman and vanished. The center one spoke.

"We have decided to grant you the option of reincarnation and three wishes." They went silent for a moment and the center one spoke again. "You've been reincarnated into the world of Naruto. Now you will choose your new appearance, location and time of birth and your three wishes. Try to be specific. "

I thought for a moment and began. "For my first wish, I want to be a Jinchuriki of an Old One from the Cthulhu Mythos. Make him have a higher form of water release called flood release and a new release called venom release; a combination of flood and yang release.

He cannot be taken from me and he has an unwavering loyalty towards me. Link us so that if I die, he dies with me. For my second wish, give me a bloodline based on Cthulhu; high strength, flexibility, regeneration, vitality, and chakra capacity. With natural high chakra control.

And finally, I want a new doujutsu that only I have and cannot be taken from me, called Idetsugan. It will have 360 degree vision, enhanced perception, x-ray vision, and the ability to differentiate between different chakra signatures. It also has an innate genjutsu that cannot be broken by any outside source." The center being nodded for me to continue.

"Give me pale skin and black hair with black eyes. I want to also be handsome. And I want to be at least 6 feet in adulthood." The left being smashed her staff into the floor and released a wave of golden energy.

"I want you to reincarnate me in Konoha, 10 years before the start of the Second Shinobi War." I wanted to be a reasonable age when the war began.

The being released a wave of golden energy. All the energy began to swirl around me and I shot off the platform like a comet.

I closed my eyes and didn't open them until the roaring sound died. I opened them again and looked at my childlike hands. I was in a small room where there was my bed, a little walking space and a small closet.

It was nighttime and my only light was from the full moon. I was exhausted so I decided to curl up, and wait till morning.


クリエイターの想い
Bigbaby Bigbaby

So I decided to start a new naruto fanfic since I didn’t like how my other one turned out. I felt I could do better so here it is. Leave a comment on how you feel about the intro and premise this far. Peace ✌️

next chapter
Load failed, please RETRY

週次パワーステータス

Rank -- 推薦 ランキング
Stone -- 推薦 チケット

バッチアンロック

目次

表示オプション

バックグラウンド

フォント

大きさ

章のコメント

レビューを書く 読み取りステータス: C1
投稿に失敗します。もう一度やり直してください
  • テキストの品質
  • アップデートの安定性
  • ストーリー展開
  • キャラクターデザイン
  • 世界の背景

合計スコア 0.0

レビューが正常に投稿されました! レビューをもっと読む
パワーストーンで投票する
Rank NO.-- パワーランキング
Stone -- 推薦チケット
不適切なコンテンツを報告する
error ヒント

不正使用を報告

段落のコメント

ログイン