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This fanfiction is so bad, wow. The wishes are disgusting, his personality is disgusting, the grammar is not that good, too op too soon. This one has no futute, I say 10-15 chapters max and it will be dropped.
This is a terrible story, no plot, bad grammar, dumb author. Too pathetic to write out words so he abbreviates at least 3 words a sentence it seems. Not smart enough to be original, and most of the story is like a mentally deficient person's thoughts on Naruto.
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Mc is pathetic. Mc is edge lord. Mc is SIMP. MC is Gary stu. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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great story👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Excelente fan fic una historia de un universo paralelo al original pero me gustó mucho más, espero que sigan subiendo historias como estás y mis felicitaciones para el autor del fan fic 👍🏼
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the author is a moron who doesn't know how to write and think, and the funny thing is that he thinks he's writing something normal stupid author stupid author the author is a moron who doesn't know how to write and think, and the funny thing is that he thinks he's writing something normal stupid author stupid author the author is a moron who doesn't know how to write and think, and the funny thing is that he thinks he's writing something normal stupid author stupid author the author is a moron who doesn't know how to write and think, and the funny thing is that he thinks he's writing something normal stupid author stupid author the author is a moron who doesn't know how to write and think, and the funny thing is that he thinks he's writing something normal stupid author stupid author
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《ch1 to 11》 ▪︎Writing Quality.............☆☆☆☆○ ▪︎Story Development.....☆○○○○ - hmm. boring - the mc gets stronger throug achievement. for every achievements he gets, he gets a free spin. by every spin he gets a random anime character. with 100% instant learn(so no training required). - fast paced and allot of time skip - the adults in this ff has a very low iq ▪︎Character Design........☆☆○○○ - he has no personality - boring mc(due to instant op) - he's behavior feels so force. ▪︎Updating Stability........☆☆☆☆○ ▪︎World Background.......☆☆☆☆○ 《 this ff has similar vibe with other ffs that gets dropped》
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