Naruto:All for One

Average. Absolutely average with nothing making the story any different from other below average stories except the power and character used which is All-For-One. That is really the only likeable trait of the story but even that isn’t used properly. The author has consistently said one thing in one chapter only to then do something else that wasn’t mentioned at all. For example, The ROB said that in exchange for the knowledge on the world he was going to, he was only going to lose the knowledge on the world when he gets there. That was it. Just that. But suddenly, the ROB started to make changes to the MC’s AFO and OFA and the crazy thing is the MC didn’t even question it or ask why this was happening as it wasn’t a part of the deal. He just took it like it was natural and part of the deal in the first place. Another thing is the authors use of the Quirk OFA. It’s LITERALLY nothing like the original with only a few similarities. The explosive speed, durability and strength the quirk provides was nowhere to be seen at all in the story. Instead, it’s being used as a support/side quirk with only meager increases in his physical body. Nothing compared to what the original Deku had. And there’s nothing explaining this as well. The story isn’t explaining it, the MC isn’t questioning it and the author isn’t, simply choosing to ignore my comments and when he does respond, it doesn’t answer any of my questions. The Ninja’s aren’t even true Ninja’s as well. Their power levels are pathetic compared to the real deal and the descriptions provided to the fight scenes and story in general are enormously lacking. I have a lot more to say. But I don’t want to make this too long. All in all, not worth my time and I suggest reading this only if you have nothing to read and don’t mind the things I mentioned above. This is my first review in Webnovel and I would have loved for it to be less harsh and more nice but unfortunately, the author did a great job frustrating me. I’m sorry but this could be so much better especially with that premise of AFO quirk but you really ruined it for me. I wish you luck on the story. (Note: This review was written after reading to chapter 21. I dropped at first but gave the story another chance only to drop it again.)

Es un buen fic.y me gusta el desarrollo me preguntó cómo hará si le dará peculiaridades mutantes como la de Mirko a alguien para crear el clan de conejitas guerreras o gatas